the unnamed

ghostly gray petals—
a shadow crossing the grass
I stepped on a name





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A minimalist reflection on mourning and the erosion of identity, set in the asphodel fields of Greek myth, where unremarkable souls wander without memory…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Hind Avatar
May 28, 2025 at 7:50 PM
Deeply woven- enjoyed :)
Tsai Avatar
May 28, 2025 at 8:27 PM
Thank you :) This is actually my very first haiku poem, I'm glad you like it!
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