The Unlit Road

Let explorers go where they will,
l have discovered my paradise in thee,
New worlds do not me, with interest fill
For you have set my roaming spirit free,

Of distant lands I dream no longer,
And I cannot think of elsewhere being,
As my passion grows, the bonds get stronger,
your presence blesses me with seeing.

You light up the road, I now must follow,
Before you were there, the road was dim,
But anywhere, without you, would be Hollow
And parting, be it but an hour, is merely an interim.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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De Beaulieu Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 2:49 PM
This poem says it all.
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September 30, 2017 at 2:41 PM
Well said.
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September 30, 2017 at 2:26 PM
This poem is beautifully written. I sense that you were talking to God. Well this is what i sensed when i was reading this poem.
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October 1, 2017 at 3:54 AM
Thank you for reading 'The Unlit Road'. Several people have felt that the subject of the poem was God. I am not averse to that interpretation. But it is actually a love poem to a specific person, in the style of John Donne, who has been a great influence in my work. Damian.
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