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The Unknown

The way it felt... that I couldn't explain! He left, my heart then disdained. Silence filled the room! That day all I could see... I was no longer Mena and Mena I wasn't meant to be! My heart he had returned. He no longer called it home! I was set free to fly, or was it set free from the unknown?

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Kerrie Sursely

Date: 4/26/2013 8:29:00 AM

Thank you Lisa :) this poem seems sad but the last line questions if he set me free from him or free from the constant heartaches of never knowing what was going on or my own questions of to stay or to go. The unknown is the hardest part and the biggest torment. He was my husband of many many years his loss was huge at the same time the loss of him turned out to be the biggest gift of happy I could ever have received :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/26/2013 1:52:00 AM

- A well written poem, a little sad Karrie. - (The bird is free, fly to another flower there are many that are beautiful) - Wish you a beautiful day, and welcome to my page. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)