The Unknown

Spiraling colors The steps to a world beyond Our destination
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Smith Avatar
March 25, 2011 at 4:20 PM
LOVE this. Looking forward to reading more, Amber! Take care of yourself. Dana'lynn
Olomi Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 5:10 PM
Brief, but wonderfully selected, Amber. I bet, they said more than they read. Thank you very much.
Mehta Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 4:18 PM
beautiful haiku with nice images, Amber
Tacito Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 12:36 PM
Stunning lines Amber. Damn.
Taylor Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 8:44 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Amber. I just finished reading all the poems you submitted the last two days and must say I'm really impressed. They were all well written and meaningful. I hope to see many more. You have quite a talent. Congrats. Excellent work. Nice going. xxxRalph
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March 24, 2011 at 8:29 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative write.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv.. check out our contests ..they are free to enter..and good luck luv..
Brown Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 6:23 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Amber. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Enter and enjoy some of the contests and I wish you the best in them. Love, Carol
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