The Universe Game

the universe game
if i give to you a universe,
you said to me this morning-
what would you fill it with?
a blank universe,
you coaxed me this morning-
tell me what i'd see.
i said, unwillingly at first-
i would not take your universe
not your gift to give...not your stars.
i would not take your universe
if you gave it on 
bended knee.
-but if i had a universe,
a blank universe i'd fill it 
with ecstasy storms
and kissing maids romping
with bright hued braids twirling
and child's first prayer that electrifies grass blades
and butterscotch ice ponds
and fields of wildflowers
and books lining roadways and 
words raining sideways-
with 
trains running backwards and 
time moving slowly
with music for dinner and 
dancing for sadness
with 
lovers and mothers
and 
magic
and 
you.
perhaps i said,
as i rolled close in the sheets 
i'd just fill it with you and i-
and i would love you when the sun
did shine
and when the sun
did not.
and i would love you when you closed your eyes
and i would love you as you wept.
love you as you walked
toes tickling my ground and sand
and i would love you when you sneezed
and as you sang
        and as you aged.
and i would love you 
sleep 
to 
sleep-
my tiny universe to keep.



sahn 
11/19/2014
thank you as always for taking the time to read my work.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 3/10/2016 1:37:00 PM
awesome poem, Shannon...LINDA
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Date: 7/19/2015 5:07:00 PM
APRIL, Stopped by to say hello, I enjoyed reading your poem today. FOREVER <3 SKAT
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Date: 12/11/2014 11:03:00 PM
A beautiful poem -- a love universe right in the bedroom next to you! Nicely done -- I really like this poem.
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Date: 12/11/2014 11:30:00 PM
thank you, pillow talk...lovers being coy and playful with words.
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