The Unicorn

The Unicorn

Once upon a time…
an incredible event occurred that was so sublime.
On a warm summer night many years ago,
awakened by the rhythmic tempo
of hoof beats coming from the yard below,
I peered outside my bedroom window.

There on my lawn I was astonished to see,
a silver-white unicorn peering back at me.
Dressed in only a nightie, I dashed out my front door;
and found him frolicking, prancing to and fro.
Sparkling as he was under a silvery moonbeam,
I wondered if this was only a surreal dream.

He was handsome, noble, and dignified,
so confident and assured trotting to my side.
In awe of this mythical creature, I couldn’t speak,
but gently patted him from cheek to glowing cheek.
His well-groomed mane felt like satin and silk,
with a faint scent of harvested hay and fresh milk.

Then I heard from inside my head,
a deep, masculine voice which stately said,
“Your Majesty, it would be my great honor
to take you on a tour of  celestial wonder!”
Reverently he bowed, as I, completely taken aback,
hesitantly mounted his muscular unsaddled back.

Time stood still as he swept me away,
right through the heart of the magnificent Milky Way.
We flew past amazing asteroids, planets, moons,
and zillions of stars looking like fiery, bulging balloons.
In flight, we traveled at the very speed of light,
and I was exhilarated with unbridled delight.

Returning me to Earth, he bowed his gallant head;
and as I dismounted graciously said,
“It’s been a pleasure, my dear Queen;
so long, and I’ll see you in your dreams!”
But even though our voyage of discovery was over,
that mystical experience changed my life forever.

Never again have I seen the unicorn on my lawn,
but from time to time, between midnight and dawn,
in my dreams, I hear a voice that’s oddly familiar
call out my name in a velvety whisper.
And somehow I know that it’s my old friend…
who’ll be watching over me ‘til the end.

02-03-2017

Contest:      Once Upon a Time
Sponsor:      Eve Roper
Placement:  10th

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 3/12/2019 4:54:00 PM
Such a wonderful tale and beautifully written. A magical subject to carry us all away. Cheers SuZ
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 3/12/2019 9:46:00 PM
Hi SuZ, thank you so much for swinging by and leaving your lovely compliments! I very much appreciate your support! Best regards and hugs. Pandita
Date: 5/13/2018 9:55:00 AM
Brilliant. I love unicorn stories having published two different ones myself. Great minds as they say....
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Date: 5/13/2018 12:24:00 PM
Awwww! Roger, thank you for honoring me with a visit! I am so glad you enjoyed this piece and happy to be in the company of an accomplished unicorn storyteller! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 4/20/2018 4:25:00 PM
This is absolutely brilliant One of my fav's for sure. Beautiful write Pandita..So glad I read this one!....Hugs Charlie
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Date: 5/13/2018 12:18:00 PM
Dear Charles, you're so sweet to leave me your kind message and compliments! Thank you so much and hope you're enjoying the weekend! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 2/10/2018 12:16:00 PM
Another winner! Ding! Masterfully penned. Just had to FAVE this beauty. Superbly done, Pandita.
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Date: 2/10/2018 12:36:00 PM
I'm am so delighted you enjoyed reading this little whimsical poem story! Thank you, Line, also for the FAV! Pandita
Date: 8/1/2017 7:36:00 PM
Very beautiful story-poem, Pandita!:)) I love Unicorns and all the magical fairy little people too:)Enjoyed the read! Well written! Be blessed! :) D.
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Date: 8/2/2017 9:10:00 AM
Thank you so much, my friend Dorian! Your compliments mean a lot to me and truly brightened my day! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 3/18/2017 5:12:00 AM
Oh, Pandita! What a beautiful poetical experience!!! And, what a nobility from YOUR unicorn-friend!! Waouh!! Rita. ^^
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Date: 3/19/2017 3:30:00 PM
Hi Rita, thank you so much for swinging by and leaving your lovely compliments! I very much apprreciate the support! Best regards. Pandita
Date: 2/11/2017 5:01:00 AM
Wow! Totally blown away. Some great imagery there and a slightly melancholic sign-off. Congratulations on a well-deserved win!
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Date: 2/11/2017 8:10:00 AM
John, thank you for the superlative compliments which mean a lot to me! Have a wonderful weekend! Pandita
Date: 2/11/2017 2:27:00 AM
Congrats!!! Pandita...superbly done...god bless...^WW^
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 2/11/2017 8:08:00 AM
Hi WW, thank you so much for stopping by and leaving your lovely compliments! I very much apprreciate the support! Best regards. Pandita
Date: 2/10/2017 9:03:00 PM
Very cute..
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Date: 2/10/2017 9:06:00 PM
Hi Pashang, thank you for visiting and leaving your sweet compliment! Have a lovely weekend! Best wishes. Pandita
Date: 2/10/2017 7:12:00 PM
Pandita, wonderful fairytale and very well written. Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/10/2017 8:31:00 PM
Eve, I am thrilled to place in your contest! Thank you for the honor! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 2/10/2017 5:44:00 PM
Congrats on your win Pandita..
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Date: 2/10/2017 8:30:00 PM
Thank you so much, my friend! Your compliments mean a lot to me! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 2/8/2017 12:04:00 PM
What a beautifully written escape to fantasy poem. I could see the unicorn in the moon light I love it.
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Date: 2/8/2017 12:17:00 PM
Hi Edward, thank you so much for stopping by and leaving your lovely compliments! I very much apprreciate the support! Best regards. Pandita
Date: 2/8/2017 9:39:00 AM
Pandita, this was exactly the type of writing I needed to read today. I am glad I found it after your visit. So well creatively written ! :)
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Date: 2/8/2017 10:10:00 AM
Hi Heidi, thank you kindly for visiting and leaving your lovely compliments that I appreciate! Best wishes. Pandita
Date: 2/8/2017 9:03:00 AM
I believe they did exist, the horse and rhinoceros are linked in lineage. & my 1st tat a unicorn, if you've seen the film "The Last Unicorn", the unicorn knows no regret. I thoroughly enjoyed this poem! 7!
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Date: 2/8/2017 10:06:00 AM
Hi Maureen, thank you for visiting and I appreciate your kind support and feedback, my friend! Glad you enjoyed the read. All the best! Pandita
Date: 2/6/2017 2:07:00 AM
you just reminded me of this movie "in my dreams" and I wish I never wake up to find the unicorn gone
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 2/6/2017 8:47:00 AM
Thank you kindly, my dear Phionah for your lovely feedback. Unfortunately a visit from a unicorn is special and oh so rare! :-)Hugs. Pandita
Date: 2/5/2017 1:59:00 PM
What a delightful and entertaining poem, Pandita! You capably made use of your vivid imagination! Such a pleasure to have you back posting. Warm regards // paul
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Date: 2/10/2017 9:05:00 PM
Thank you, my dear friend! Hugs. Pandita
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Paul Callus
Date: 2/6/2017 9:03:00 AM
Keeping her in my thoughts and prayers...
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 2/6/2017 8:44:00 AM
Dear Paul, I'm trying to get back on track. My Mother is critically ill so it's been a little difficult. Thank you so very much for the warm welcome and for your always kind, supportive, and complimentary words! Best regards to you! Pandita
Date: 2/5/2017 9:01:00 AM
An enchanting story Pandita...Well penned...
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Date: 2/6/2017 8:41:00 AM
Hi Joseph, I appreciate your kind support and feedback, my friend! All the best! Pandita
Date: 2/3/2017 11:43:00 AM
Pandita, this is certainly a winner in my books! It is a charming fairy tale and beautifully told! A-7 to to you and good luck in the contest. I think Eve will enjoy the read as well! Kika
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Date: 2/3/2017 11:46:00 AM
Hi Kika, thank you for the great compliment and high score! Have a lovely weekend! Best wishes. Pandita
Date: 2/3/2017 10:58:00 AM
I enjoyed your wonderfully adventure story I can almost believe it was true x well done x
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Date: 2/3/2017 11:31:00 AM
Hi Wendy, thank you so much for stopping by and leaving your lovely compliments! Have a great weekend! Pandita
Date: 2/3/2017 10:09:00 AM
Lucky unicorn:) I love your imagination, Pandita. A very entertaining tale:) Good luck!
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 2/3/2017 11:28:00 AM
Hi Daniel, thank you so much for your support, my friend! Have a beautiful day! Pandita
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