The Unicorn

The Unicorn

Once upon a time…
an incredible event occurred that was so sublime.
On a warm summer night many years ago,
awakened by the rhythmic tempo
of hoof beats coming from the yard below,
I peered outside my bedroom window.

There on my lawn I was astonished to see,
a silver-white unicorn peering back at me.
Dressed in only a nightie, I dashed out my front door;
and found him frolicking, prancing to and fro.
Sparkling as he was under a silvery moonbeam,
I wondered if this was only a surreal dream.

He was handsome, noble, and dignified,
so confident and assured trotting to my side.
In awe of this mythical creature, I couldn’t speak,
but gently patted him from cheek to glowing cheek.
His well-groomed mane felt like satin and silk,
with a faint scent of harvested hay and fresh milk.

Then I heard from inside my head,
a deep, masculine voice which stately said,
“Your Majesty, it would be my great honor
to take you on a tour of  celestial wonder!”
Reverently he bowed, as I, completely taken aback,
hesitantly mounted his muscular unsaddled back.

Time stood still as he swept me away,
right through the heart of the magnificent Milky Way.
We flew past amazing asteroids, planets, moons,
and zillions of stars looking like fiery, bulging balloons.
In flight, we traveled at the very speed of light,
and I was exhilarated with unbridled delight.

Returning me to Earth, he bowed his gallant head;
and as I dismounted graciously said,
“It’s been a pleasure, my dear Queen;
so long, and I’ll see you in your dreams!”
But even though our voyage of discovery was over,
that mystical experience changed my life forever.

Never again have I seen the unicorn on my lawn,
but from time to time, between midnight and dawn,
in my dreams, I hear a voice that’s oddly familiar
call out my name in a velvety whisper.
And somehow I know that it’s my old friend…
who’ll be watching over me ‘til the end.

02-03-2017

Contest:      Once Upon a Time
Sponsor:      Eve Roper
Placement:  10th
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Delaney Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 4:54 PM
Such a wonderful tale and beautifully written. A magical subject to carry us all away. Cheers SuZ
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March 12, 2019 at 9:46 PM
Hi SuZ, thank you so much for swinging by and leaving your lovely compliments! I very much appreciate your support! Best regards and hugs. Pandita
Turner Avatar
May 13, 2018 at 9:55 AM
Brilliant. I love unicorn stories having published two different ones myself. Great minds as they say....
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May 13, 2018 at 12:24 PM
Awwww! Roger, thank you for honoring me with a visit! I am so glad you enjoyed this piece and happy to be in the company of an accomplished unicorn storyteller! Hugs. Pandita
Messina Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 4:25 PM
This is absolutely brilliant One of my fav's for sure. Beautiful write Pandita..So glad I read this one!....Hugs Charlie
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May 13, 2018 at 12:18 PM
Dear Charles, you're so sweet to leave me your kind message and compliments! Thank you so much and hope you're enjoying the weekend! Hugs. Pandita
Gauthier Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 12:16 PM
Another winner! Ding! Masterfully penned. Just had to FAVE this beauty. Superbly done, Pandita.
Sietesantos Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 12:36 PM
I'm am so delighted you enjoyed reading this little whimsical poem story! Thank you, Line, also for the FAV! Pandita
Petersen Potter Avatar
August 1, 2017 at 7:36 PM
Very beautiful story-poem, Pandita!:)) I love Unicorns and all the magical fairy little people too:)Enjoyed the read! Well written! Be blessed! :) D.
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August 2, 2017 at 9:10 AM
Thank you so much, my friend Dorian! Your compliments mean a lot to me and truly brightened my day! Hugs. Pandita
Solis Radius Avatar
March 18, 2017 at 5:12 AM
Oh, Pandita! What a beautiful poetical experience!!! And, what a nobility from YOUR unicorn-friend!! Waouh!! Rita. ^^
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March 19, 2017 at 3:30 PM
Hi Rita, thank you so much for swinging by and leaving your lovely compliments! I very much apprreciate the support! Best regards. Pandita
Michaels Avatar
February 11, 2017 at 5:01 AM
Wow! Totally blown away. Some great imagery there and a slightly melancholic sign-off. Congratulations on a well-deserved win!
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February 11, 2017 at 8:10 AM
John, thank you for the superlative compliments which mean a lot to me! Have a wonderful weekend! Pandita
Warrior Avatar
February 11, 2017 at 2:27 AM
Congrats!!! Pandita...superbly done...god bless...^WW^
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February 11, 2017 at 8:08 AM
Hi WW, thank you so much for stopping by and leaving your lovely compliments! I very much apprreciate the support! Best regards. Pandita
Salehi Avatar
February 10, 2017 at 9:03 PM
Very cute..
Sietesantos Avatar
February 10, 2017 at 9:06 PM
Hi Pashang, thank you for visiting and leaving your sweet compliment! Have a lovely weekend! Best wishes. Pandita
Roper Avatar
February 10, 2017 at 7:12 PM
Pandita, wonderful fairytale and very well written. Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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February 10, 2017 at 8:31 PM
Eve, I am thrilled to place in your contest! Thank you for the honor! Hugs. Pandita
May Avatar
February 10, 2017 at 5:44 PM
Congrats on your win Pandita..
Sietesantos Avatar
February 10, 2017 at 8:30 PM
Thank you so much, my friend! Your compliments mean a lot to me! Hugs. Pandita
Mccall Avatar
February 8, 2017 at 12:04 PM
What a beautifully written escape to fantasy poem. I could see the unicorn in the moon light I love it.
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February 8, 2017 at 12:17 PM
Hi Edward, thank you so much for stopping by and leaving your lovely compliments! I very much apprreciate the support! Best regards. Pandita
Sands Avatar
February 8, 2017 at 9:39 AM
Pandita, this was exactly the type of writing I needed to read today. I am glad I found it after your visit. So well creatively written ! :)
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February 8, 2017 at 10:10 AM
Hi Heidi, thank you kindly for visiting and leaving your lovely compliments that I appreciate! Best wishes. Pandita
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February 8, 2017 at 9:03 AM
I believe they did exist, the horse and rhinoceros are linked in lineage. & my 1st tat a unicorn, if you've seen the film "The Last Unicorn", the unicorn knows no regret. I thoroughly enjoyed this poem! 7!
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February 8, 2017 at 10:06 AM
Hi Maureen, thank you for visiting and I appreciate your kind support and feedback, my friend! Glad you enjoyed the read. All the best! Pandita
Renitah Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 2:07 AM
you just reminded me of this movie "in my dreams" and I wish I never wake up to find the unicorn gone
Sietesantos Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 8:47 AM
Thank you kindly, my dear Phionah for your lovely feedback. Unfortunately a visit from a unicorn is special and oh so rare! :-)Hugs. Pandita
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February 5, 2017 at 1:59 PM
What a delightful and entertaining poem, Pandita! You capably made use of your vivid imagination! Such a pleasure to have you back posting. Warm regards // paul
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February 10, 2017 at 9:05 PM
Thank you, my dear friend! Hugs. Pandita
Callus Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 9:03 AM
Keeping her in my thoughts and prayers...
Sietesantos Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 8:44 AM
Dear Paul, I'm trying to get back on track. My Mother is critically ill so it's been a little difficult. Thank you so very much for the warm welcome and for your always kind, supportive, and complimentary words! Best regards to you! Pandita
May Avatar
February 5, 2017 at 9:01 AM
An enchanting story Pandita...Well penned...
Sietesantos Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 8:41 AM
Hi Joseph, I appreciate your kind support and feedback, my friend! All the best! Pandita
Ayala Avatar
February 3, 2017 at 11:43 AM
Pandita, this is certainly a winner in my books! It is a charming fairy tale and beautifully told! A-7 to to you and good luck in the contest. I think Eve will enjoy the read as well! Kika
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February 3, 2017 at 11:46 AM
Hi Kika, thank you for the great compliment and high score! Have a lovely weekend! Best wishes. Pandita
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February 3, 2017 at 10:58 AM
I enjoyed your wonderfully adventure story I can almost believe it was true x well done x
Sietesantos Avatar
February 3, 2017 at 11:31 AM
Hi Wendy, thank you so much for stopping by and leaving your lovely compliments! Have a great weekend! Pandita
Turner Avatar
February 3, 2017 at 10:09 AM
Lucky unicorn:) I love your imagination, Pandita. A very entertaining tale:) Good luck!
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February 3, 2017 at 11:28 AM
Hi Daniel, thank you so much for your support, my friend! Have a beautiful day! Pandita
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