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The Undisputed

The Undisputed I usually prevail when mostly other have doubts, as my hostel rival friends taunt, boo and shout, when they know my mind is focus on that title bout. I took the stubborn champ to the limit with a reserve of deadly impact of fresh crushing blows therefore had the ruthless undefeated champ dazed, shocked, and lay resting looking at my dancing toes as I exit to go ending the big show. 2/15/11 by Keith K. Relf

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/14/2012 12:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in David's "Hero's & Heroine's" contest Keith. Love, Carol
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Keith Relf
Date: 6/14/2012 4:18:00 PM
Thanks... Carol, its more to that you may enjoy, :D
Date: 6/13/2012 6:28:00 AM
Congratulations Kieth, nicely done xx
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Keith Relf
Date: 6/13/2012 11:38:00 AM
thanks... its more to that story that i mounted :D
Date: 6/13/2012 1:59:00 AM
Keith you were the only male to speak about yourself, very well done, hope you enter my latest contest..David
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Keith Relf
Date: 6/13/2012 11:17:00 AM
thanks, i learn, you have to have little ambition for your self. :D
Date: 6/12/2012 9:16:00 PM
finally, another guy on the list!! many women won this time, but it's good to see this Undisputed here among them!! Congrats on your win, Kieth.
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Keith Relf
Date: 6/13/2012 11:22:00 AM
I am the only man..? ... wow thanks... :D
Date: 5/19/2012 5:44:00 PM
me too :)
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Date: 5/19/2012 5:40:00 PM
this one i dig alot
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Keith Relf
Date: 5/19/2012 5:53:00 PM
"me too :)"
Date: 5/11/2012 9:44:00 PM
this is good one and that's just part of it "The Undisputed Ones"
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Date: 5/10/2012 2:43:00 PM
Keith, like your poem alot. - You do it well! - oxox hugs Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/9/2012 1:03:00 PM
I am trying to catch up some on my thank you's to all the wonderful poets who have left kind comments on my writings. I thank you so much for your words of kindness Keith. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope you are having a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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