Keith Relf Poet Lyric

The Undisputed

The Undisputed



 I usually prevail when mostly other have doubts,

 as my hostel rival friends taunt, boo and shout,

 when they know my mind is focus on that title bout.

 I took the stubborn champ to the limit with a reserve

 of deadly impact of fresh crushing blows therefore

 had the ruthless undefeated champ dazed, shocked,

 and lay resting looking at my dancing toes as

 I exit to go ending the big show.


 2/15/11 by Keith K. Relf

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Carol Sunshine Brown June 14, 2012 at 12:18 PM Congratulations on your win in David's "Hero's & Heroine's" contest Keith. Love, Carol Keith Relf June 14, 2012 at 4:18 PM Thanks... Carol, its more to that you may enjoy, :D

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl June 13, 2012 at 6:28 AM Congratulations Kieth, nicely done xx Keith Relf June 13, 2012 at 11:38 AM thanks... its more to that story that i mounted :D

David Williams June 13, 2012 at 1:59 AM Keith you were the only male to speak about yourself, very well done, hope you enter my latest contest..David Keith Relf June 13, 2012 at 11:17 AM thanks, i learn, you have to have little ambition for your self. :D

Andrea Dietrich June 12, 2012 at 9:16 PM finally, another guy on the list!! many women won this time, but it's good to see this Undisputed here among them!! Congrats on your win, Kieth. Keith Relf June 13, 2012 at 11:22 AM I am the only man..? ... wow thanks... :D

Keith Relf May 19, 2012 at 5:44 PM me too :)

Adrian Burrageii May 19, 2012 at 5:40 PM this one i dig alot Keith Relf May 19, 2012 at 5:53 PM "me too :)"

Keith Relf May 11, 2012 at 9:44 PM this is good one and that's just part of it "The Undisputed Ones"

Anne-Lise Andresen May 10, 2012 at 2:43 PM Keith, like your poem alot. - You do it well! - oxox hugs Anne-Lise

Carol Sunshine Brown May 9, 2012 at 1:03 PM I am trying to catch up some on my thank you's to all the wonderful poets who have left kind comments on my writings. I thank you so much for your words of kindness Keith. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope you are having a wonderful day. Love, Carol