The Undead

the undead arise

        slowly lurking around me

to prepare moon's feast

   



Halloween Senryu for Laura Loo
10/20/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Rodrigues Avatar
October 24, 2017 at 7:00 AM
Wonderful! Congrats, Nette!
Scars Avatar
October 24, 2017 at 5:13 AM
very creepy! great one sweet Nette :) thank you and congrats :)
Inman Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 9:39 PM
An eerie scene Nette. What's on the menu?
Callus Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 4:22 PM
An excellent Halloween senryu, Nette! Congratulations on placing first! Hugs // paul
Dietrich Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 3:17 PM
Congrats, Nette. I love seeing these shorter types of poems!!
Michaels Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 1:29 PM
Ooooh... creepy!! Really like this one, Nette. Congrats on your win. Regards, John.
Pett Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 11:47 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Nette, such a cleverly written Senryu. :))
Smith Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 10:42 AM
Congratulations Nette...
Soper Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 7:23 AM
Nicely penned... Congrats on the win
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 6:51 AM
Creepy! Congrats on your win Nette :) xomo!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 6:05 AM
Sorry name wrongly spelt, Nette.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 6:04 AM
Congratulations on your great win, ,Mette.
Roper Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 5:06 AM
Wonderful, Nette, congratulations on your win hugs Eve
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