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The Undead

The UnDead


bloodthirsty suckers,
vampires on the prowl for prey -
a blast of sunshine

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Okoi Nkanu

Date: 11/6/2014 3:51:00 PM

Lovely, lovely piece....... we hear you. would have loved a lengthy gory though.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 11/6/2014 6:35:00 PM

Okoi, so you like this one - well check out my piece called "On Halloween Night" which is longer and has quite a bit of gore:-) lol! I think you will enjoy that one! Hehehehe! Pandita

Kika Ayala

Date: 8/29/2014 8:24:00 PM

I guess they got what they deserved:-) lol! Enjoyed this dark piece! Kika

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/29/2014 10:07:00 PM

They sure did! Thank you for visiting, kika! Pandita

The Situation

Date: 6/10/2014 10:54:00 AM

There is a God somewhere!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/10/2014 1:08:00 PM

That's right, my friend! Thanks for stopping by - I really appreciate it!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2014 10:02:00 AM

haha of course it is, who doesn't love bloodthirsty suckers...;)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2014 8:20:00 AM

hahaha This has to be my most favorite Hikau ever... Love it, YES I DO! Linda

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/9/2014 9:54:00 AM

Linda, thank you so much for your compliments. This is one of my favorites also!

John Michaels

Date: 6/5/2014 4:25:00 AM

Nice! Those three lines so succinctly describe the whole story; Hollywood would take 2 hours to make a mess of it!! This reminds me... I've got a Vampire poem *and* an Undead Haiku somewhere... I'll have to post them here at some point!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/5/2014 6:38:00 AM

Hi John, thank you so much for visiting and for your great compliments! Please post your poem - I'm looking forward to seeing it! Kindest regards!