The Uncertain Heart

The river flows without a care in the world
The wind blows never asking "where will i go"
Will my heart ever be like the river or the wind never
caring or ever asking 
Or will it wither away, afraid to ever grow, or go to those 
places that call for a vulnerable heart
This i do not know and at times the uncertainty 
consumes the peacefulness of my mind, 
and the what if's of the days to come invade the privacy
of the confident heart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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June 2, 2016 at 12:34 AM
Danie Garza, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *Y-N-R---SKAT*
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February 29, 2016 at 9:52 PM
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Garza Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 9:58 PM
I would love the constructive criticism its why im here!
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February 29, 2016 at 7:49 PM
Well done...
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February 29, 2016 at 7:57 PM
Thanks i really appreciate it.
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February 29, 2016 at 7:52 PM
Thanks i really appreciate it.
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