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The Uncertain Heart

The river flows without a care in the world The wind blows never asking "where will i go" Will my heart ever be like the river or the wind never caring or ever asking Or will it wither away, afraid to ever grow, or go to those places that call for a vulnerable heart This i do not know and at times the uncertainty consumes the peacefulness of my mind, and the what if's of the days to come invade the privacy of the confident heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/2/2016 12:34:00 AM
Danie Garza, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *Y-N-R---SKAT*
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Date: 2/29/2016 9:52:00 PM
Great write Danie,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Danie Garza
Date: 2/29/2016 9:58:00 PM
I would love the constructive criticism its why im here!
Date: 2/29/2016 7:49:00 PM
Well done...
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Danie Garza
Date: 2/29/2016 7:57:00 PM
Thanks i really appreciate it.
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Danie Garza
Date: 2/29/2016 7:52:00 PM
Thanks i really appreciate it.

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