Aditi Mishra Poet Verse

The Unborn Sun

Blooming lavender lilac print,
                                        splashed on the hues of April tint;
                               
                                    your sundress.


   Perky eyes curious spring face,
                                      will love old stories of the space
                                     
                                       at sundown.

   Bubbling life in taciturn swan,
                                    changing patterns shadowed upon
 
                                           sundial.

   Whispered lullabies melt around,
                                      resting on my lap dreaming sound

                                         till sunrise.

   Awaiting your sweet soothing muse,
                                       reviving kiss for morning blues
     
                                        my sunshine.

May 13, 2020

Compounding The Verse Poetry Contest
Sponsored By:  Joseph May
~Winner: Second Place

STRAND no 770 any theme any form Contest
Sponsor: Brian Strand
~Winner: Second Place

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John Watt November 10, 2020 at 6:05 PM I remember this contest, Aditi, but I'm surprised I never left you with a comment. I love the format/layout you applied, the lovely rhymes, and the five 'sun' compound words you came up with. I really feel the dreamy, peaceful, romantic vibe in this one. Peace ~ John

Edward Ibeh May 25, 2020 at 12:14 AM Excellent piece, Aditi:-) Heartiest congratulations on your win. I love the layout of your poem as well! Aditi Mishra May 25, 2020 at 2:41 PM Thank you so much for your kind words of appreciation Edward :)

Connie Marcum Wong May 24, 2020 at 1:10 PM Another beautiful creation from your talented pen Aditi! Congratulations on your marvelous Second placement! xxoo Aditi Mishra May 24, 2020 at 1:42 PM Thank you so much Connie for your continuous words of appreciation and encouragement. Blessed :)

Joseph May May 23, 2020 at 7:35 PM Wonderful write Aditi, Congrats on your win.. Aditi Mishra May 23, 2020 at 7:40 PM Thank you for appreciating and for the placement in your contest Joseph :)

Janice Canerdy May 23, 2020 at 3:15 PM Aditi, this is such a beautiful poem! CONGRATS on your win. Janice Aditi Mishra May 23, 2020 at 7:39 PM Thank you for appreciating Janice :)

Mohan Chutani May 13, 2020 at 11:04 AM Aditi, you make it flow so smooth, even this difficult form. GL. Mohan Aditi Mishra May 13, 2020 at 12:22 PM Thank you for your generous review Mohan :)

Swetha Vangaveti May 13, 2020 at 11:01 AM Beautifully crafted. An instant fave :) Aditi Mishra May 13, 2020 at 12:20 PM So glad you loved it. Thank you Swetha :)

Jenish Somadas May 13, 2020 at 9:33 AM Wow.. Beautifully penned.. I love your heading.. The Unborn Sun.. Good luck Aditi.. Aditi Mishra May 13, 2020 at 9:36 AM Thank you Jenish :) The poem revolves around the imaginations of that unborn sun, so I couldn't think of another title.

Vijay Pandit May 13, 2020 at 6:12 AM Awesome, lovely verse you wrote, Aditi! Your description paints the arrival in colors of the morning, wonderfully--whispering to the reader. Well done. A winning poem you wrote. Aditi Mishra May 13, 2020 at 7:32 AM Thank you for your meaningful and kind review Vijay. :)