The Ultimate Halloween Night

In a far away land in the pacific called home,
Group of teenagers are unaware of the doom,
We’re talking about the scary evil spirits,
Ghosts are everywhere and blood-sucking zombies.

People going inside can’t go out breathing and alive,
Witches doing their spells, it’s miracle if you can survive,
Who will help you in times of need?
If you are surrounded with bundles of talking weeds?

You have to run fast if you value your life,
Do you have sharp objects or even a knife?
Wolves with sharp fangs are ready to ravish you,
It’s an ultimate halloween night I told you so.

Just around the corners are spiders with venom,
Creepy sounds everywhere reminding you it’s full moon,
Vampires looking for victims to hypnotize,
So pray for your life if you are really wise.

September 27, 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Sathasivam Avatar
October 13, 2013 at 8:12 AM
Excellent. Well done. Enjoyed your poem. Tfs
Horne Avatar
October 11, 2013 at 3:21 PM
wow, scary write!
Onclaud Avatar
October 11, 2013 at 11:00 AM
paz, we do celebrate Hallow here and your bone-chilling piece makes me await this holiday with excited anticipation... will keep in touch when i go back to bkk soon.. :) hugggs
Gasun Avatar
October 10, 2013 at 1:53 AM
Hi, my dearest friend Maria! Biggest hugs to you! Sorry for stopping by just now. So busy and out of bkk. Thank you so much for sharing this amazing Halloween poem again and your lovely visits/comments on my poem. Have a great day always! love lots and big big hugs, Leonora
Mohammed Avatar
October 6, 2013 at 10:06 AM
Well done Maria my friend.
Onclaud Avatar
October 5, 2013 at 2:06 PM
eerie and charming, paz.. you make Hallow a crazed experience!... well done!..:) huggs
Andresen Avatar
October 5, 2013 at 7:00 AM
- Will wish you a beautiful weekend, Maria! - All the best to you my friend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Gasun Avatar
September 30, 2013 at 9:07 AM
An excellent & highly creatively & imaginatively written creepy poem this is my dearest friend Maria. You did this poem extra-ordinarily well with words of wisdom at the end. So love and enjoy reading it tonight. A winner in my book. Good luck & best wishes always my very dear friend! love lots always, Leonora
Adams Avatar
September 29, 2013 at 8:01 AM
what a great Halloween poem...brought back childhood memories...my brother used to have one of those creepy, scary houses that kids all approached with caution! Enjoyed the read :)
Dietrich Avatar
September 28, 2013 at 11:02 PM
This kind of night to enjoy only on the television as a movie!! I still remember the spook houses. They kind of scared me!!!
Andresen Avatar
September 28, 2013 at 12:33 PM
- Horror and ghosts .... dark, cold and windy night ..... buuuu...uuuu...uuu !! - Lock all doors and windows .... It's Halloween! - Very well written Maria, good luck in the contest! - Hope your weekend will be great! - All the best to you my friend! - oxox
Liwayway Avatar
September 28, 2013 at 12:37 PM
thanks a lot friend Anne :) Have a great Weekend ;)
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