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The Ugly Truth

Life drags you on hot coal... pulls you down and make you fall... the pain soo unbearable, it kills your soul.. but keep on going and reach your goal... Life is not as sweet as a chocolate cake... everybody is praying for a break... happiness doesn't depent on the money we make... think of everythin as a challenge we should take... This world isn't always fair... the sufferings of life, everybody has to bear... cannot judge people by the clothes they wear... we are all dying inside, I swear...

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Date: 3/28/2025 4:26:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 1/22/2016 7:57:00 PM
Aqeelah Packeerally,, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Always with LUV **SKAT**
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