The Two Drunk

They want to enjoy
As they drink beer too much]
They think the result will be glad
And they laugh about it

Suddenly she fails to walk
He also loses memory complete
Their prediction is wrong
They support on each walking going wrong way

They didn’t listen to their parent’s advice
At least someone told you’re going the wrong way
Now they can’t move again
They sit in confusion blaming each other

They sit until they are normal
They now reject what they did
Although they think it was fun
As they disobeyed parental advice
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Agustin Avatar
November 2, 2024 at 5:53 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 4:53 PM
tanaka chirombo, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
A  Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 2:00 PM
Tanaka, enjoyed reading your poem. Hugs **SKAT**
O'Driscoll Avatar
January 22, 2013 at 4:52 AM
hahaha, well at least they had fun :)
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