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The Two Drunk

They want to enjoy As they drink beer too much] They think the result will be glad And they laugh about it Suddenly she fails to walk He also loses memory complete Their prediction is wrong They support on each walking going wrong way They didn’t listen to their parent’s advice At least someone told you’re going the wrong way Now they can’t move again They sit in confusion blaming each other They sit until they are normal They now reject what they did Although they think it was fun As they disobeyed parental advice

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/26/2016 4:53:00 PM
tanaka chirombo, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/4/2016 2:00:00 PM
Tanaka, enjoyed reading your poem. Hugs **SKAT**
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Date: 1/22/2013 4:52:00 AM
hahaha, well at least they had fun :)
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