The Twirl

You danced with me
under the youthful trees
no music played just
the summer breeze
you took my breath
with every touch
your words were perfect
you said just enough
 
i tried to hide
how you made me
feel because i knew
that We Just Couldnt Be
You already Had Your Girl
And I Was Just Someone
You Liked to Twirl
 
That night we spent
beneath the stars
when you told me
you loved me , and
showed me all your scars
that night i should have
held your hand
that night i didnt kiss you
when i should of had
 
But that night i was
someone elses girl
so all we shared was
a midnight twirl
on those swings
so many stories we
would tell
you were the first
that in love I fell !

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 3/2/2014 7:43:00 AM
Lovely poem. What could maybe have been...what if...but perhaps better this way; love triangles hold countless snares. // paul
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Date: 2/7/2014 1:02:00 PM
A notty poem when infidelity tempts. An entertaining poem on infatuation. Fun to read. Pls coment my latest poem too.
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Date: 2/7/2014 9:20:00 AM
Melancholy memories of the one that got away. Creatively written. It flows.
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Date: 2/6/2014 8:47:00 PM
Welcome to the soup Sarah hope you find many new friends here and enjoy the soup family. I enjoyed reading this poem of yours about love I could sense the emotion you were emitting from it. Your soup friend Michael P.S. stop by and check out some of my works someday
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