The Twinkling In My Heart

Male and female 
Boys and girls 
Tall and short 
Light and dark 
Plying the tarred roads 

To make ends meet 
Running gallantly 
Competing for buyers 
This battle...
 is not for the weak and weary 

Pity is the enigma
 that flows..
 through
 my 
downtrodden veins 
questions are asked....
.when will the plight
 of the common man change 

When will this oppression 
and deadly plague 
Of  dehumanization come to an end 

Oh Nigeria,Nigeria 
Consider the plight...
 of your brothers and sisters 
Most of which
 this deadly sea of poverty 
Has derailed off 
the path of success 

They say all hands are not equal 
....Smiling...not equal they are 

But symbiosis they share  
The common man
 is part of the cosmo of this 
nation 
And each deserves
 the silverspoon
 to attain 
success.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 9/24/2013 6:42:00 PM
A beautiful poem of hope for a successful future, and with determination I am sure that it will be achieved. Great work!...Thank you for the kind comments on my poem. I really appreciate it!
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Oluwatomiwo Akinyemi
Date: 9/24/2013 11:41:00 PM
My pleasure kelly...thanks for your kind comments too...its well appreciated. We will stive to make this world a better place OA.
Date: 9/23/2013 5:44:00 AM
That's my friend, he is a good poet
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