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The Tunes

loud and whistl-y

a full-fledged morning, the tunes —

a vibrant springboard

4/18/2022

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Panagiota Romios

April 28, 2022 at 1:19 PM

So pretty, Kim! Pangie

Kim Rodrigues

April 28, 2022 at 3:15 PM

Thank you, Pangie!

Demetrios Trifiatis

April 22, 2022 at 5:23 AM

What a phantasmagoric morning, my dearest Kim. It is God's creation! Be blessed!

Kim Rodrigues

April 22, 2022 at 8:41 AM

Thank you!

Sara Kendrick

April 21, 2022 at 1:40 PM

So many wonderful sounds in spring. This one reads like a good contender to me if for a contest. Way to go. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

April 21, 2022 at 3:17 PM

Thank you, Sara!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

April 19, 2022 at 7:56 PM

I can practically hear those springtime tunes! Lovely.

Kim Rodrigues

April 20, 2022 at 10:29 AM

Thank you, sweet lady! :)

Gershon Wolf

April 19, 2022 at 7:07 PM

Don't know why, but I'm reminded of the opening of the musical 'Oklahoma:' "There's a bright golden haze on the meadow... the corn is as high as an elephant's eye...' Oh, well. I must be going senile or something. lol. :)

Kim Rodrigues

April 20, 2022 at 10:30 AM

Cool! If that senility has you all sparkly-eyed :)