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The Truth About Jim

A letter from a poetess Read from a sister to her sis' Written a few years ago by their mother About their unknown other brother She wrote- "I tried my life to go find him You have a brother, his name is Jim For every day my hearts been sad Since the day he was taken by his dad I was seventeen when he was born For seventy years my hearts been torn Should I have told you, or should I have not I've thought about that a lot One day a letter came in the mail From Jim's father who died in jail He wrote- "I'm sorry, I know how you have cried But the truth about Jim, is that he died That day when you thought I took Jim away A car struck Jim when he went to play For together we could never be Because the driver of that car...was me"

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Date: 10/22/2023 10:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a wonderful write/story. Great Ending... "Love It" Have a blessed day writing away..........
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Date: 10/21/2023 8:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win..
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Date: 10/21/2023 7:49:00 AM
Dear Charles, heart wrenching poem. Thank you for taking part in the contest. Congratulations on your win. God bless you
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Date: 10/3/2023 2:55:00 PM
What a heart breaking twist to this one. Charles: perfect Heroic Couplets for this not too heroic story. Well done, SuZ
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Date: 9/29/2023 4:55:00 PM
This poem is so emotional, and although it's written for a contest and fiction ,there are true stories like this . Excellent write Charlie. Pulled at the heartstrings. Hugs
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Date: 9/29/2023 2:59:00 AM
Oh this is a heart breaking poem.. you expressed it so well..
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Date: 9/28/2023 1:32:00 PM
Oh my goodness Charles this deserves a lot more attention. That twist at the end is quite emotional. Excellent job on this
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Charles Messina
Date: 9/29/2023 2:19:00 AM
Thank you, Tom. I wrote it for a contest and tried to take them theme in a different direction. Sometimes, you get that about poems we've written (lol) Thanks for stopping by...much appreciated!

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