The Trusted Servant

All the leaves turned and waved
Before the darkness turned them grey
And buried 'neath the scarlet sins
Were skies so red the poppy grins

"Heed not your torment" old crows caw
"The carriage ride belongs to all"
As monotone the workmen chant
Sixpence for stipples love's recant

"The day will come" the old tree swayed
"Tho seasons change and hearts will fray,
Steadfast your beacon, pointed north,
And hallowed be, your love go forth"



11/24/23
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Sergi Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 6:58 PM
strong flow love the last line of this one Jim
Adams Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 6:48 PM
great verse... this one flowed perfect with the read, power within these lines...fine write :)
Guzzi Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 3:00 PM
Hey Jimbo, I enjoyed reading your verse this afternoon. They always make me want to know more! Light & Love
Tacito Avatar
November 25, 2013 at 11:08 AM
There is a lot of depth in between the lines. Wonderful job! I'm sorry I couldn't get your call through the show yesterday. So many technical difficulties...
Mehta Avatar
November 25, 2013 at 4:26 AM
Quite appealing allegory, Jimbo
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