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The Trunk

Eight boys, toddlers, some on the verge of those teen years
Play together with the trunk as the center 

Unfinished
Thoughts still running around/ don't know exactly how this will work out
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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July 15, 2015 at 4:07 PM
looking forward to you working it out,,,,personally i always think of the trunk (if indeed it is a tree trunk) as the back bone (the strength) of the tree or the human.......good luck look forward to the finished poem...
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July 15, 2015 at 1:48 PM
interesting poem~LOVE LINDA~
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