The True Self

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Oracle 
  psalmic 
    on 
      elysium 
          winds
          &
         lustral 
   polyphonic
chorales 
  in
amber chronicles
  
Seven seas 
   converge 
      in
   stillness 
  of 
arcane 
   heart
&
sky 
  empties 
   its 
      azure 
        yearnings
in 
wispy 
   turquoise 
         of
    endless 
       depths
 
Tattooed 
     echoes 
         of
       aureate 
           verses
&
meet 
   your 
     real self 
      a 
       mystic 
          in 
     red radiance!

Written: January 19, 2023

Brian Strand No 1172 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brian Strand

NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE   using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.

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Anisha Dutta

Date: 1/20/2023 10:43:00 PM

Excellent ! …in mystic red radiance. Have Good days.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/20/2023 1:03:00 PM

WOW!!! What a write. Thanks for adding the note at the bottom. Have a great day/weekend.............

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/20/2023 6:45:00 AM

Reads like a good contender for Brian's contest. I think he likes this kind of work. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. An answer to your mail is on its way. Sara