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Oracle psalmic on elysium winds & lustral polyphonic chorales in amber chronicles Seven seas converge in stillness of arcane heart & sky empties its azure yearnings in wispy turquoise of endless depths Tattooed echoes of aureate verses & meet your real self a mystic in red radiance! Written: January 19, 2023 Brian Strand No 1172 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.

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Date: 1/20/2023 10:43:00 PM
Excellent ! …in mystic red radiance. Have Good days.
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Date: 1/20/2023 1:03:00 PM
WOW!!! What a write. Thanks for adding the note at the bottom. Have a great day/weekend.............
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Date: 1/20/2023 6:45:00 AM
Reads like a good contender for Brian's contest. I think he likes this kind of work. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. An answer to your mail is on its way. Sara
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Date: 1/20/2023 6:38:00 AM
Brilliantly done my friend. A sure win for you, as always.
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Date: 1/20/2023 2:59:00 AM
You are very adept at writing this form. I wouldn't know where to start. Great write.
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Date: 1/20/2023 1:33:00 AM
Oh wow! Brilliant! A fav
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Date: 1/19/2023 7:18:00 PM
Beautiful, Sotto, should be a winner:)
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