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The Trouble With Life

Life can be strange Happy moments come Nothing in the world can Tear you down it's happiness. Just by one word Can make your world Come crashing down, The feeling of happiness And hope no longer excites. The trouble with life It can bend and twist Around you making You believe whatever It wants in happiness Or sadness it plays With your feelings and Emotions wrapping it's Vines around you. It binds us holds Us down it makes Us falls trips us Slides through your Fingers with no cares.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/24/2011 5:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured, Catherine
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Date: 3/21/2011 5:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Catherine. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/4/2011 12:27:00 PM
on first line it is "can be" instead of "can be"; thought provoking though
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