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The Tropics

Palm trees in white sand Sea breeze sways banana trees Stoned on sun and rum

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/22/2010 12:25:00 AM
great Haiku...love it so much...I live in the tropics...I like the way how you romanticize it because the general notion of romantic is that of only western scenery...^_^ v
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Date: 7/16/2010 9:40:00 PM
great haiku, loved it
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Date: 7/15/2010 6:03:00 PM
What an interesting use of imagery to paint a picture with words. Keep on writing! Best wishes. Karen
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Date: 7/15/2010 4:50:00 PM
great write!..
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Date: 7/11/2010 6:15:00 AM
Very good!!! love it..... Michael
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