The Tropics

Palm trees in white sand
      Sea breeze sways banana trees 
            Stoned on sun and rum
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Galua Avatar
July 22, 2010 at 12:25 AM
great Haiku...love it so much...I live in the tropics...I like the way how you romanticize it because the general notion of romantic is that of only western scenery...^_^ v
Roberts Avatar
July 16, 2010 at 9:40 PM
great haiku, loved it
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July 15, 2010 at 6:03 PM
What an interesting use of imagery to paint a picture with words. Keep on writing! Best wishes. Karen
Semeniuk Avatar
July 15, 2010 at 4:50 PM
great write!..
Falotico Avatar
July 11, 2010 at 6:15 AM
Very good!!! love it..... Michael
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