Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

The Trip

Clouds of gray encompass the day
Crepe Myrtle blooms abound
Bright Rudbeckia only sun                       (Leaving home
Petunia's purple crown

Hilltop view of Potato Creek
Also distant mountains
Those being restless man's daydreams      (Hilltop at Potato Creek
Looking for a fountain  

Curvy the road as climb those hills
Going up going down
Drainage assured water that flows             (Mountains to Flint River
To river and ocean fill 

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Jennifer Spase July 18, 2012 at 12:01 PM life sounds very quenched in paradise.nice

Nette Onclaud July 18, 2012 at 11:50 AM floating with vivid scenes, sara... this has both emotional and content appeal.. winning wishes and hugggs!:)

Ronny Madonsela July 18, 2012 at 2:42 AM you painted this beautifuly sara. I love. If its for the contest best of luck. I loved it. *smiles* RON

Tim Ryerson July 17, 2012 at 7:38 PM Makes me want to visit that place, Sara...sounds like a beautiful trip...isn't your home in Georgia and is that were you went? - Tim

Russell Sivey July 17, 2012 at 6:59 PM What a well desript write my friend! I really enjoyed these wonderful images you painted before me! What a beautiful poem! Great Work!!