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The Trip

Clouds of gray encompass the day Crepe Myrtle blooms abound Bright Rudbeckia only sun (Leaving home Petunia's purple crown Hilltop view of Potato Creek Also distant mountains Those being restless man's daydreams (Hilltop at Potato Creek Looking for a fountain Curvy the road as climb those hills Going up going down Drainage assured water that flows (Mountains to Flint River To river and ocean fill

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/18/2012 12:01:00 PM
life sounds very quenched in paradise.nice
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Date: 7/18/2012 11:50:00 AM
floating with vivid scenes, sara... this has both emotional and content appeal.. winning wishes and hugggs!:)
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Date: 7/18/2012 2:42:00 AM
you painted this beautifuly sara. I love. If its for the contest best of luck. I loved it. *smiles* RON
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Date: 7/17/2012 7:38:00 PM
Makes me want to visit that place, Sara...sounds like a beautiful trip...isn't your home in Georgia and is that were you went? - Tim
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Date: 7/17/2012 6:59:00 PM
What a well desript write my friend! I really enjoyed these wonderful images you painted before me! What a beautiful poem! Great Work!!
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