The Trick

He stood on stage silent,
his presence was violent,
his body trembled in fear.
A slight puff of grey smoke,
His sharp words came out choked,
"I'm certain I'll disappear."
The magician's fierce stare,
The dark theater's seats bare,
"Another crowd gone, Oh Dear."

Robert Dixon
10/13/2011
Balassi Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
October 24, 2011 at 8:09 AM
Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's "Balassi Stanza" contest Robert. Love, Carol
Jones Avatar
October 23, 2011 at 5:12 PM
Oh dear, indeed! Clever Balassi, Robert, melikes it. Congrats, happy day, namaste~N
Sweetheart Avatar
October 23, 2011 at 8:50 AM
Congrats Robert on a top ten victory with this exceptional entry for the contest luv...
Freeman Avatar
October 23, 2011 at 5:36 AM
A neat idea, lovely verse, congratulations on a worthy presentation. Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
October 23, 2011 at 3:49 AM
Congratulations on the win in my contest, Robert
Jones Avatar
October 13, 2011 at 6:00 PM
Bravo the bravado balassi! Beauty eve to ya~N
Lane Avatar
October 13, 2011 at 5:32 PM
I've done the same thing just by reading my poetry to an audience. Tony
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