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The Triangle

Aylin is all he thinks about Aylin is who he loves Aylin is the one he always wants to be with Aylin is the one whos better for him Aylin she will always lover him Aylin she doesnt like me for some reason Aylin... So why do I feel so aggrivated I lost him because of her I must push him away now I am scared because I will always want him I hurt when i spend five minutes with him. I messed everything up with him He can only tell me that ill find love one day He doesnt want to hangout with me anymore He will never love me He is so kind to everybody He is the one I cut for He is the one I live for He Is the one I yearn for So why did I mess things up for us?

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Allison Bowser

Date: 7/22/2009 10:00:00 PM

I know this sounds odd but.. this isnt what you want. if this is about u. you should break free of the chains you wrap around yourself. it is his lost. not yours =D I am 14 and went though really, really hard break ups and i relized that every time he was the loser of it. keep your head up =D and Please dont harm youself cause of him. <3 Allison

Edward Orozco

Date: 7/5/2009 3:17:00 PM

Good write! Really enjoyed this read! - jeremia

Ashley Yates

Date: 7/5/2009 3:14:00 PM

Love is such an interesting and sometimes painful experience... I hope you can get past the sorrow and pain and find love again one that isnt painful...

Frances King

Date: 7/5/2009 2:04:00 PM

You don't always like the one you love, do you? Beautifully expressed, thank you! Frances

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/5/2009 2:04:00 PM

Love hurts sometimes. Sara

Sajdah Al-Riyami

Date: 7/5/2009 2:00:00 PM

Love triangle.I think i had that 2wice*.*Its a mess and It leads to hurt.ONE of you has to break it off:This Aylen girl must be pretty fake if she Dont liek you*.*(Or jealous=) )

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 7/5/2009 1:29:00 PM

Applause, applause! I love this piece. I needed to read this. I have one similar to this one named Ten Long Years not to advertise mine. This is great the way that you constructed it and the content. I love this one. Job well done. I am honored to be the first to comment. You should put this one in a contest!