Tiffany Julius Poet I do not know?

The Triangle

Aylin
is all he thinks about
Aylin
is who he loves
Aylin
is the one he always wants to be with
Aylin
is the one whos better for him
Aylin 
she will always lover him
Aylin
she doesnt like me for some reason
Aylin...

So why do I feel so aggrivated
I
lost him because of her
I 
must push him away now
I 
am scared because I will always want him
I
hurt when i spend five minutes with him.
I
messed everything up with him

He
can only tell me that ill find love one day
He
doesnt want to hangout with me anymore
He 
will never love me
He 
is so kind to everybody
He
is the one I cut for
He 
is the one I live for
He
Is the one I yearn for

So why did I mess things up for us?

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Allison Bowser July 22, 2009 at 10:00 PM I know this sounds odd but.. this isnt what you want. if this is about u. you should break free of the chains you wrap around yourself. it is his lost. not yours =D I am 14 and went though really, really hard break ups and i relized that every time he was the loser of it. keep your head up =D and Please dont harm youself cause of him. <3 Allison

Edward Orozco July 5, 2009 at 3:17 PM Good write! Really enjoyed this read! - jeremia

Ashley Yates July 5, 2009 at 3:14 PM Love is such an interesting and sometimes painful experience... I hope you can get past the sorrow and pain and find love again one that isnt painful...

Frances King July 5, 2009 at 2:04 PM You don't always like the one you love, do you? Beautifully expressed, thank you! Frances

Sara Kendrick July 5, 2009 at 2:04 PM Love hurts sometimes. Sara

Sajdah Al-Riyami July 5, 2009 at 2:00 PM Love triangle.I think i had that 2wice*.*Its a mess and It leads to hurt.ONE of you has to break it off:This Aylen girl must be pretty fake if she Dont liek you*.*(Or jealous=) )

Nicole Sharon Brown July 5, 2009 at 1:29 PM Applause, applause! I love this piece. I needed to read this. I have one similar to this one named Ten Long Years not to advertise mine. This is great the way that you constructed it and the content. I love this one. Job well done. I am honored to be the first to comment. You should put this one in a contest!