The Trees-Book 1

~The Trees~

When water stopped running
In the tiny empty river
The trees along its borders
All began to quiver

For without the flowing water
These trees could not grow
Where are the crystal waters
That once used to flow

Was the futures intent
For them to have died
Were there any among us
Who at least stood and cried

Did their death have a purpose
That is part of a plan
A message from nature
Directed towards man

But when rain started falling
Where the old trees once grew
This began a cycle
That started life all new

For out of the virgin earth
Young trees are now sprouting
Screaming life never ends
That's what I hear them shouting
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This was always one of my favorites from the first book. 
I like how the reflections of nature combine with such a powerful message. And then the way it develops into its ultimate ending was something that had really impressed me at the time of writing it. I thought how it structures the promise of never ending life was amazing. 
Picture a mountainside that has burned to a blackened and barren landscape.
If you were to view that same area 10-12 years later,
You’d understand the earth’s rejuvenation ability.
Now think of your life in the same exact way. :-) 
(Book 1 ©1995 "The Journey Lost and Confused")
God Bless and Best Wishes to YOU...Peace
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Nutter Avatar
September 18, 2010 at 3:25 PM
I can see why this was one of your favorites. Nice piece.
Lagoski Avatar
January 31, 2021 at 11:00 AM
:-) Thank You very much for your Kindness. God Bless and Best Wishes...Peace
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September 18, 2010 at 3:22 PM
Sad to see beautiful full grown gracious trees die from a year or two of drought...But to see the new ones come up with hope of beautiful full grown trees to take the place of the ones that succombed to the stress of drought is so refreshing..Glad that you chose this topic on which to write your work..I am glad that I chose this one to read today.Sara
Lagoski Avatar
January 31, 2021 at 11:02 AM
Dear Sara...Although I am 10 years overdue commenting back to you, Thank You so much for your complimenting Thoughts and Comment :-) God Bless You My Friend...Peace
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September 18, 2010 at 3:17 PM
James, a wonderful poem nice rhyme and flow. A well done expressing on trees. Enjoyed your poem,..LeeAnn
Lagoski Avatar
January 31, 2021 at 11:03 AM
Dear LeeAnn...Thank You for your Kind Words My Friend :-) God Bless and Best Wishes to YOU...Peace
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