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The Tree

The tree is here, still, in pure stone,   
            
as cold as the night that has found me alone

No glory to crown, no branch to bend down

No cradles for sparrows to shelter their young

Not even one leaf to drift in the wind---

               Mourning the death, hear the nightingale's song


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Carrie Richards 7/26//15
For Nette's Contest: Complete These Lines"
The tree is here, still in pure stone ....Pablo Neruda
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 8:29 PM
AMAZING!! congrats
Onclaud Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 12:42 AM
breathtaking mood and sullen in theme!..a pleasure to see this in my contest, carrie.. huge congrats !
Harding Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 12:47 PM
Very sad and beautiful. Congrats on your win, Carrie! xoxo
Leiser Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 12:27 PM
I'm sorry, I meant to say CARRIE!! Congrats again!!
Leiser Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 12:26 PM
Excellent top tier win, dear Andrea! Congrats and a 7 :)
Reams Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 8:25 AM
This is a wonderful write and so sad Carrie! Congrats on your win!
A. Sharma Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 12:42 AM
Congrats on ur winning awesome write Carrie! Wonderful imagery!
A  Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 12:39 AM
WOW, Carrie, that is one of the best. Congrats on your win. SKAT
Roper Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 9:13 PM
Carrie, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Allison Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 2:00 PM
Absolutely stunning Carrie - many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Nunez Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 11:32 AM
As I said before, this is a winner, Carrie. Congrats! hugs
Lawless Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 8:15 AM
CONGRATS CARRIE,,,,,WELL DONE.....
Lindley Avatar
July 29, 2015 at 9:16 AM
Very glad to have found this beautifully written poem this morn. The image of old , battered and lonesome blasts out as it is read. You may like to read my recent poem about a tree, one my childhood depended. A7, truly a great poem my friend.
Ryerson Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 12:30 PM
What can I say my friend? Every line is a work of art, and the last says SO very much to me...Yes indeed, in spite of death the nightingale still sings on her branches...
Nunez Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 7:33 PM
Lovely, CArrie. Another winner here. hugs!
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