The Treasures Within

A beggar had been sitting at the side of a road
For over thirty years on a box which was old.
One beautiful day a stranger walked by.
“Spare some change?” – asked the beggar and sighed.
“I have nothing to give you”, - said the stranger to him,-
“What is that you are sitting on?” “Just an old box, I seem.
I’ve been sitting on it for as long as I live”.
“Ever looked what’s inside?” “There is nothing in it”.
“Have a look in to see - there’s something or not”.
So he opened the box and it was filled with gold. 

I was inspired by a parable from Eckhart Tolle’s Book “The Power of Now”.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 3/8/2024 3:50:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 10/23/2017 12:49:00 PM
Theme is awesome/
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Zhalya Abiyeva
Date: 9/26/2018 11:16:00 PM
Thank you, Ilham. Happy that you like it.
Date: 5/4/2016 9:05:00 AM
Zhalya Abiyeva, I'm just here visiting your poem once again. If you ever return to post, I'd like to come back and read your newest. Happy Days **SKAT**
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Zhalya Abiyeva
Date: 5/16/2016 4:24:00 AM
Happy Days to you, as well, SKAT. Thank you for your support.
Date: 2/7/2016 5:06:00 AM
Why thank you Zhalya, I try to be supportive... LINDA
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Date: 2/6/2016 11:24:00 AM
thank you for the reply
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Zhalya Abiyeva
Date: 2/7/2016 2:53:00 AM
you are welcome, Linda.
Date: 2/4/2016 7:04:00 PM
Hi Zhalya, this poem ia awesome. LINDA
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Zhalya Abiyeva
Date: 2/5/2016 4:56:00 AM
Hi Linda. Thank you very much for your kind comments!
Date: 9/9/2015 1:36:00 PM
Zhalya, thank you for sharing. A pleasure to read... SKAT
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Zhalya Abiyeva
Date: 9/10/2015 5:10:00 AM
You are most welcome, dear SKAT. Thank you for reading and for your kind comment.
Date: 5/13/2014 11:03:00 AM
Thank you for sharing :) It touched my heart
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Zhalya Abiyeva
Date: 5/14/2014 2:12:00 AM
Thank you for your inspiring comment, James. :)
Date: 11/26/2013 11:26:00 PM
Wow amazing narrative poem with a surprise ending. See u!
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Zhalya Abiyeva
Date: 12/2/2013 8:12:00 AM
Thank you very much for reading my poem and for your kind comments.
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