The Trap-2

THE TRAP

The trap is open, with the bait arguing out
Its immunity with the victim somewhere
In a world that flashes its sharpened sword
To cut across all those rock-hard impunities

You petulant preacher comment not on that,
Count your days instead and collect your doom
Mouth craving, head reeling, you are a sluggard
You, the evening's fever  on  night’s forehead.

I might trip once more into the trap of birth
No guide is looked for, no wisdom is sought
May be I'm a harlequin too wise for all this
Go slow with your game. I'm no more fair game.

Be sure that fine- honed day is waiting to flash
In a ready demonstration of how to slash. 

For Charlotte's 'Free for All' contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
November 1, 2014 at 1:28 AM
WAy to go in the contest, Jag. BIG congrats to you.
A. Sharma Avatar
October 30, 2014 at 10:30 PM
What a beauty Nair! Very creative write, congrats on huge win!
Yvonne Avatar
October 30, 2014 at 4:38 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win with this gem.
Gasun Avatar
October 30, 2014 at 4:16 AM
Congratulations on your great win and on this outstanding poem of yours my dear friend, Jag! Hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 29, 2014 at 9:40 PM
Congratulations on your fine win.
Richards Avatar
October 29, 2014 at 9:00 PM
Wow....the message and the wit/sharp tongue couldn't be expressed any better than this !! Excellent poem !! Wow!! Congratulations are in order !!!
Allison Avatar
October 29, 2014 at 7:47 PM
very deep write - many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Puddifoot Avatar
October 29, 2014 at 6:29 PM
well jaggy, this was a surprise, I had no idea this one was yours! but I should've known really, because it's so deep, as your poems invariably are...it's very well written, and reading it again it possibly should have been a 2nd place, but it went very well with the other two poems in 3rd; I really like "the evening's fever on night's forehead." - congrats on your win in my contest, sweetie xoxo :)
Johnson Avatar
June 29, 2011 at 5:16 PM
Yes trials is what its all about, come here to suffer learn about, tangled pig trough for the snout, this methinks without a doubt... :) interesting verse mate, Don
Cooper Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 9:25 AM
wow great pen you have artfully written
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