The Tower Rebuilt

I shall resolve to leave this
Place now...
And steadfastly search out,
Nestling between ridge and bluff
Amidst the folds of a foreign 
Land,
Several acres of unkempt ground
Fallow and rough;
Upon which stands...
Crumbled stone walls
With an exposed slate roof in
Some state of disrepair,
And a rounded brough
Complete with smooth, 
Well trodden steps
Twisting around a narrow stair.

An Inglenook, therein,
Will I construct,
With deep reveals to cheer me
In my idling days,
And wide spanning arch
To sit before and stay the onset
Of this old age...
And all its creeping ills;
While in all the subtle crafts
In which I was taught 
to be so ably Skilled:
Rebuild this castle
Inside the wistful echos
Of these deeply-spilling 
And far resounding hills.

Then, with mind well set,
complete with muscles willing
Sinew 
And perspirations honest sweat,
I shall toil upon this task;
For a little more precious time,
Coupled with fortitude and 
Diligence,
In truth, is all one my humbly
ask.
And by my will...
And by my command -
Raise up these fallen blocks
Once more
Upon this goodly land.

For could it happen that
Every night,
Before I gladly retire,
I glimpse a trace of those whose 
Face 
Haunt the hot flames of my steady 
Fire?
Disregarding manifested nightly 
Shadows,
That, in their lonely spectral 
Travels,
Creep across old squeaking boards...
Lain at right angles
Over the creaking joists
Hidden under ingrained, 
Dusty, oaken floors.

And placing down my thick and 
Heavy,
Red leather-bound book
I reach across for thread, 
Sharp needle and hook;
When picking up the threadbare  
Blue-velvet rags...
I stitch in the bright silvery stars
We once eagerly reached for,
But did not quite grasp,
In our younger days as lustier 
Lads;
Perhaps pausing in mid-motion,
With a rueful look,
To pensively consider of that
Weary road 
One lone stray drummer,
Still steadily drumming -
Steadfastly took.

Consider! Accession is but a 
Trifle -
The anointed destiny of all 
Royal Kings... 
And all earthly prizes pale asides 
Whatever riches accumulated
Wisdom gradually brings:
Born of labor,
Re-doubled effort,
Born of non-compromise...
And fated,
Gently resigned, nodding sighs.

Rising now on upright stiffening
Bones...
Listening to the dark hours 
Belated howls
Rise over the laments
Of the Lime-torched rafters 
Swelling moans;
And, plodding slowly upwards
Of my bell-less tower -
Seek out welcome sleep 
Within my shaking, wind swept
Bower!

Slung low under the eastern 
Point
Of a sharp crested Moon...
The radiant Dog-Star
Floods its rainbow colours through
Narrowed slits
Of the high turreted room.
Port-side lies my yawing bed
Rigged-out in white linen sheets;
Amidships my mattress spread -
Two firm pillows serve as cabin 
To plunge about my weary head!

Storm rages down...
And storm blows below -
Redoubtable little boat 
Swung back and fro!
Tossed and tipped from trough 
To pitch:
Resolute timbers - Lashed afloat 
This angry ditch!
Caught in the deep channel 
Of my chaotic bind...
To seek safe haven I do 
Endeavour to find:
A safe harbour on some newly
Formed virgin shore;
Along whose gentle currents  
My sturdy tiller swings...
And now steers for -
Upon the white spumes 
Of a steady bore.

Now...
Far, far, far above,
Past where Andromeda yields,
And Hercules, who upon the head
Of Draco kneels;
And far, far, far beyond 
Interstellar dust - 
Adorned the blazing Constellations 
Throng...
I walk between the milky-ways
Of sunlit nights and shinning
Eternal days...
Which relentlessly spiral
Aboard boundless rays.

For, it seems, that a man can 
voyage over the unfathomable 
Bars 
To chase his elusive dreams
Among the crowded stars;
Where, cutting the black voids
With heavens lights:
Hissing crystal tails of vaporous 
Comets -
Condense within the blazing trails
Of burning meteorites!

Indeed! Men may sail on celestial
Seas -
As they traverse the showering 
Heights:
Exploding forth in grandest 
Majesties 
In golden realms of the Gods 
Hurled smites!
Seek their solace upon Eternities 
Unending oceans -
Their fortunes blown by solar winds:
Mortal souls searching in perpetuity 
Until the dawning revelry then 
Rescinds.

Answering the call to old Gabriels 
Horn,
As dappling sunlight creeps across
My undaunted little tower,
I open my eyes to the new born
Morn -
When summoned to the beckoning
Hour.
Descending from my fortified
Might,
Reinforced with new found zeal,
I reflect upon this newly provoked
Insight -
As the happy chapel bell begins
To joyously peel!

So awaken, Herald! 
And usher in ennobled thoughts,
For enlightenment sought,
Inside where aspirations deem
To dwell.
Just as the planted seeds,
Of much great nourished deeds,
Do so germinate - all naysayers to 
Dispel;
As all lofty creeds, 
Must at some point,
Readily concede, in time,
To the bleak tolling 
Of the cruel fates final knell!

Therefore, put yourself to the 
Immediate task,
Against all obstacles however 
Mean or extreme,
Whilst upon the faithful handle 
Firmly grasp
Of worn tools whose blades are
Worthy and keen.
When bending your strong back 
To take the strain,
Denying any quarter or appeals 
To moderate refrain,
Over adversity you justifiably 
Deign:
Your laudable goals, 
Thus, to surely attain.

Hear me then!
Build tall your Broughs,
Withstanding fancies flight,
Disregarding all those
Who may well try:  
Seek to disparage, ridicule and
Slight.
Suffer not scoffers, knaves 
And braying fools 
But raise up your proud
Monuments
Wherever you should most joyfully
Choose!
For in among the ruins where
Failure steals:
So prevails triumph -
To forever chase his grim presence 
From your low-rubbled fields!




My gratitude to my good friend Mr George Dee Vuy for inspiring me to conceive these
last three verses with the beautiful word..."Ennobled"!! 
Many thanks, George!
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Cresswell Avatar
September 8, 2017 at 9:42 AM
I love words, their taste and texture. I love your words because they are a feast.
Fleming Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 3:13 AM
Thanks, Patricia. I rather enjoyed writing this one; but, like most of my poems, it needs some serious editing -- All in good time! My very best regards, Patricia - Cheers! :) john
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March 9, 2017 at 9:09 AM
Magnificent! I do not say that lightly. I must return to get the full meaning and import of this sojourn but I do so connect with the emotion expressed--the triumphs and the failures over a lifetime. I especially like the last stanza-- But raise up your proud monuments wherever you should most joyfully choose! You do that so well, John. Take care, good friend. Kathy
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March 21, 2017 at 2:38 PM
Hello again, Kathleen...Always so very nice to see you putting in an appearance on my page; I hope everything is well with you, and you are in good health and spirits. Thank you for your lovely comments - they are much appreciated! I enjoyed, very much so, writing this poem...It contains all of my own personal ideologies all the way through. My very best regards, Kathy...And, of course, my warmest wishes as ever. Your good friend. :) john
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October 11, 2016 at 10:03 PM
Great. This one and the others of yours that I've read are by far the best poems that I found so far on this cite. Very good imagery. Very Wordsworth-like.
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October 16, 2016 at 3:30 PM
Jerome - You are most welcome! Please excuse the overly long delay concerning my reply...Unfortunately I have been rather "Laid-up" of late. Many thanks for the fantastic comments - Much appreciated! My very best regards, Jerome. :) john
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August 26, 2016 at 9:51 PM
Breathtaking. I will have to read this many more times to fully savor it. I love your phrases and the atmosphere and am so glad to have found your work. This is a fave. All the best, Agnes
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August 27, 2016 at 6:08 AM
Agnes, I am so very glad to have formed this new friendship with your good self. Rest assured I will be repaying you with a visit in the very near future...Many thanks, and...My very warmest wishes! :) john
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February 18, 2016 at 9:22 AM
This is wonderful and lovely. Nice poetry here dear friend.
Fleming Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 9:54 AM
Hello, Funom. So very nice to see you visiting again. Thank you for the kind comments - Much appreciated! My very best regards to you, Funom! :) john
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 11:02 PM
John, I so enjoyed the inspiring journey your masterpiece of a poem took me on, and tonight when I sleep and I set sail on "celestial seas" I will think of you and hope to be in your fine company! I adored this! My eyes wouldn't let me enjoy reading this lengthy endeaver before now. I am working on that. Blessings my dear friend.
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December 8, 2015 at 6:28 AM
My dearest Connie: What wonderful accolades you do so accord me...such lovely sentiments! An amazing voyage it would truly be: A journey of unending discovery after mind-blowing discovery through the spiraling orbits of endless stars! One day, in the very distant future, some lucky souls will gaze upon these wonders of what we can only dream of - But dreams are what inspire us all to achieve greater things ! My warmest wishes as always Connie. :) john
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December 1, 2015 at 8:30 AM
I am truly impressed, this is an exceptional piece. I can see you have put a lot of thought into this work. It appears hard work does pay off.
Fleming Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 11:34 AM
Hello, Richard. Nice to see you visiting once again - you are always most welcome! Thank you very much for the high praise and kind comments - They are much appreciated! My very best regards to you, Richard! :-) john
Johnson Avatar
November 28, 2015 at 4:38 PM
this journey of the mind will write, upon the mists of time, ever skilful in the quest, endows another rhyme...
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November 29, 2015 at 4:53 AM
Nicely rhymed, Don! Thanks for the visit to my page. My best regards to you! :) john
Yvonne Avatar
November 26, 2015 at 8:47 AM
John you are one of the best writers I have ever read. Thank you for this beautiful gift you have laid on this page. A pure joy to read over and over. This is a fav for me. love always, armand
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November 26, 2015 at 12:05 PM
Armand, it is so very good to see you appearing on my page once again! I have truly missed your presence - you have been sorely missed by all! I hope everything is good with you now, my friend. My very warmest regards and well wishes...many thanks, Armand! :-) john
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November 25, 2015 at 9:39 AM
I like to go back after I have read a poem, and read all the comments about it. You certainly hit the jackpot with this one. Your comments about publishing led me to return to comment further. You were correct when you said it probably needed editing, but you can do that yourself. Never let a poem rest, revise, revise, revise is the secret. This one deserves it. Form a local poetry group, and invite members. It works. Our group meets once a month. Fun, fun!
Fleming Avatar
November 26, 2015 at 3:21 AM
Thank you, Cona, for taking the time out to make another visit, and thank you for all your kind words and advice - much appreciated! Cheers! :-) john
Adams Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 6:42 AM
This isn't just a poem, it is an epistle. An amazing seven for me.
Fleming Avatar
November 25, 2015 at 1:11 AM
Hi, Cona. It is nice to see you writing poetry once again. Many thanks for the visit and kind comments; much obliged! My very best regards! :-) john
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November 23, 2015 at 7:35 AM
A tremendous poetic structure that reaches the heights of heaven! Excellent , dear John! A seven!
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November 23, 2015 at 12:11 PM
Thank you, Demetrios, for your kind words - Much appreciated! A pleasure for me to see you visiting once again. My very best regards! :-) john
Onclaud Avatar
November 16, 2015 at 12:24 PM
looking forward to your next surprise, john.. huggs
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November 16, 2015 at 2:08 PM
Hi, Nette. I have three epics on the go, one from years back. Might be able to upload one of them in a couple of weeks. Nice to see you dropping by. My very warmest regards! :-) john
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November 14, 2015 at 2:45 PM
Oh, WOW, John! You have truly wowed me with this epic write! It's genius...like one of the classics, I could read this over and over again...to my FAVs...I thank you for your visit to my page last week. Your kind words encouraged me to put pen to paper again. Hugs, Rhonda
Fleming Avatar
November 14, 2015 at 4:24 PM
Rhonda I will never forget how you inspired me to write "Hidden Beauty". It is, and will always be, the most powerful piece of poetry I will ever conceive...I put everything into it. It is my poem - But your inspiration! I dedicate it to you without a moments hesitation. Your friend always... :-) john
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November 7, 2015 at 11:29 AM
John, this is truly pure genius! You are a master weaver of poetic tales and I am totally captivated by your words and expressions that artfully transported to another place and time! WOW and a 7! Pandita
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November 7, 2015 at 12:47 PM
Thank you, Pandita. These are very gracious remarks you award me - I am most obliged! I am happy to read that you enjoyed the poem...I really did quite enjoy writing it. Please visit again whenever you have time. My warmest regards, Pandita! :) john
Murray Avatar
November 6, 2015 at 4:36 PM
My oh my. What a reintroduction to Poetry Soup John. I was here about 5 years ago when my emotions were all over the place after my separation. So nice that a master such as you would be the first to comment positively on my feeble efforts. I straight away thought of Innishfree.
Fleming Avatar
November 6, 2015 at 4:49 PM
Thank you so much, Jean. You are most perceptive! The poem is indeed inspired by Yeats masterpiece: "The Lake Isle of Innisfree". The genius of William Butler Yeats has had the biggest impact upon my style of writing along with that other great genius, Byron. My warmest regards, Jean. :) john
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November 1, 2015 at 3:45 PM
a towering piece ablaze with powerful metaphors of rebirth, john... huggs
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November 2, 2015 at 9:13 AM
Thank you, Nette. I have edited and re-edited since you last viewed the poem; it is a far better read now I feel. Thanks for the visit and high praise, Nette...I always enjoy seeing you come around - You are most welcome here at anytime! My warmest regards! :) john
Leiser Avatar
October 31, 2015 at 8:06 PM
Wow, such an epic, excellent write, John! I'm so glad I came by to read your poem and see how the "masters" write :) Wonderful!
Fleming Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 2:24 AM
Laura...You have given me a wonderful accolade - Thank you! It is so nice to see you visiting once again; you are always most welcome here at anytime. My very best regards as always, Laura! :) john
Atkinson Avatar
October 30, 2015 at 3:35 PM
Interesting. Makes one question: Did I get the meaning right? But then, poetry's a trip through emotions, that's, after all, the main point. This you did and did it well.
Fleming Avatar
October 30, 2015 at 7:16 PM
Hi, Bob. Nice to make your acquaintance! You are, in my opinion, spot on regarding your comments about emotion being the essence of poetry. This poem is all about a solitary man evaluating his life. He determines to sell what he owns and buys a ruin in a foreign land. With what is left of his slowly diminishing strength he strikes out alone to build his dream and leave his legacy. I know of this man. My very best regards! :-) john
Dietrich Avatar
October 25, 2015 at 6:04 PM
such eloquent writing. Very classy. who is the George that inspired you?
Fleming Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 1:50 AM
Why our very own George Dee Vuy! A gentleman and a scholar...A thinking man! It was George who inspired the last three verses when I was wondering aloud how to finish it off. He made a comment and used the word: "Ennobled". Wow...what a great word! Thanks George! Nice to see you visiting again, Andrea...My very best regards to you! :-) john
Lindley Avatar
October 24, 2015 at 6:07 PM
I am blessed to have found and read this true work of art my friend.With no second thoughts about it , adding this superb write to my fav list here! A pure pleasure to read this magnificent poem!7
Fleming Avatar
October 25, 2015 at 3:41 AM
Robert, it is a great pleasure to see you visiting once again. Thank you for your generous and kindly comments...They are much appreciated! All the very best, Robert! :-) john
Lindley Avatar
October 24, 2015 at 6:06 PM
I am blessed to have found and read this true work of art my friend.With no second thoughts about it , adding this superb write to my fav list here! A pure pleasure to read this magnificent poem!7
Callus Avatar
October 24, 2015 at 3:50 PM
An excellent epic poem that follows in the footsteps of a saga. I don't usually go for long poems, John, but I must admit that this one kept my attention right up to the very end. Indeed, an inspired offering which I even read for a second time! a fav!! ~ Regards // paul
Fleming Avatar
October 25, 2015 at 3:34 AM
I am pleased you enjoyed the poem, Paul...Very pleased! Your comments are always of value to me. Your visit is much appreciated as always! My very best regards, Paul. :-) john
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October 24, 2015 at 3:47 AM
Spent the greater part of the past 15 minutes just reading and rereading, silently or aloud, this masterpiece, John. You outdid yourself! My favorite is the last stanza, with a gentle admonish for us to "Build tall your Broughs, Withstanding fancies flight, Disregarding all those Who may well try: Seek to disparage, ridicule and Slight. Suffer not scoffers, knaves And braying fools ". The last 5 lines brings it to a resounding and grand eloquent conclusion. 7 and FAV. A POTM material. hugs!
Fleming Avatar
October 24, 2015 at 10:32 AM
Kim, I am deeply touched by your most generous and very gracious comments...As always you give me so much encouragement - Many, many thanks! My very best regards as always! Your friend... :) john
Breidenthal Avatar
October 24, 2015 at 1:35 AM
Wow...beautiful work here...stanza four is particularly intriguing.." it seems, that a man can voyage over the unfathomable Bars To chase his elusive dreams Among the crowded stars" love those lines...beautiful work as always...Laura
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October 24, 2015 at 10:28 AM
Hi, Laura. It is so nice to see you visiting once again. I always look forward to your visits; I am pleased that you enjoyed the poem. I have to confess: That I rather like it myself. Many thanks for the lovely comments you have left me - They are much appreciated! My very best regards! :) john
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