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The Tower

A long walk away In a dusty recess in my mind In a polished drawer You will find A picture of you in a fortified tower A picture framed in a glorious hour. You smile at the lens A genuine smile; not one of your lies And your eyes sparkle like clear water Stipped of pretence Shown out of disguise. In this picture you love me As I loved you In that hour In that tower.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/7/2009 12:17:00 PM
Love your poetry...pls sing it 100 times, use your guitar if you're a musician..sell your first 1 m. records...all the best.
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Date: 4/6/2009 8:54:00 PM
you are one of the luckys who was able to capture a true moment in time
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Date: 4/5/2009 2:29:00 AM
Really like this, i have pictures like this. Sally
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Date: 4/4/2009 9:24:00 AM
sweet poetry! Mark! Jim
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Date: 4/4/2009 8:02:00 AM
Hanna, this is a very sweet love poem. You have created a poem with visual image and your love shines through. Welcome to Poetrysoup
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