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The Tortoise

To be a big tortoise, old and wise
His house is his shell and his disguise
Deliberate and quiet, he values no prize
Taking only enough to thrive and survive
War, hate, and color not seen through his eyes
We think we're smart, the old tortoise is wise.

    Feb 19 2017

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Deborah Burch

March 12, 2017 at 9:20 PM

I like turtles!! congratulations Daniel and well done!! Big Hugggs deb

Alexis Y.

March 11, 2017 at 11:59 PM

Hi Daniel, You've penned a good fable. Congratulations on your fine win: -) Alexis

Eve Roper

March 11, 2017 at 9:14 PM

Wonderful fable, Daniel, congratulations on your win ~* Hugs Eve

Lindsay Laurie

January 21, 2016 at 1:56 AM

Hello Daniel ... like all animals, its all about survival. It's us humans who are indulgent - thank you Daniel - Lindsay

Daniel Turner

January 21, 2016 at 7:20 AM

Thank you. You are too kind.

Maurice Rigoler

January 19, 2016 at 2:22 PM

Not at all offended by your remark. We each can offer our views as we see fit. Keep writing and posting. / M

Maurice Rigoler

January 19, 2016 at 1:13 PM

I tend to agree with your poem somewhat, for animals, like humans, have their dark side, and Nature, if one looks carefully, is anything but a Disneyland. I have written poems on this subject but more in keeping with the "true" nature of animal behavior. Thanks so much for stopping by and commenting on my work. Best to you in your writing endeavors. / M

Daniel Turner

January 19, 2016 at 2:07 PM

Thank you sir and yes I agree, nature is definitely brutal at times. I think there is already enough darkness in the world, so I like to present a lighter side when I can. I appreciate your insight and do hope I have not offended you.