The Tireless Hummingbird

the tireless hummingbird

hurriedly flitting
from one feeder to the next
never do they tire

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 8/21/2018 11:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. So true. Fast and tireless. Excellent haiku!
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Date: 8/20/2018 5:30:00 PM
They are the most exquisite creatures to watch. Congratulations on your lovely haiku win! : )
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 8/20/2018 7:35:00 PM
I stand at my kitchen window and marvel at these little miracles of God. They delight even the dreariest of times. Thanks for your support, Connie.
Date: 8/19/2018 2:14:00 AM
Congratulations on winner. Though they do need to rest a lot in trees as they burn energy so fast. Esp. during mating when dive much faster than usual speeds to impress !
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 8/19/2018 2:54:00 AM
Yes, Virginia, there really is a Santa Claus! WOW, I've always wanted to say that! Don't know why. Anyway, thanks for the congrats. I watch them outside my kitchen window and marvel at their antics.
Date: 8/18/2018 6:53:00 PM
Very good my friend. Congrats.
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 8/18/2018 7:48:00 PM
Thank you, my friend. I appreciate your support.
Date: 8/18/2018 10:39:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Curtis. Well done.
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 8/18/2018 10:45:00 AM
Thanks, Line! As much as I care about hummingbirds, it is nice to be able to write a simple few words about them for a contest and be chosen a winner.
Date: 8/18/2018 10:28:00 AM
Awesome one and I'm glad you are on the winners' list. Congratulations, Curtis.
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 8/18/2018 10:43:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea! If I am on the same list as you, I feel I have made quite an achievement. You are tops! Glad you are on the list as well.
Date: 8/18/2018 10:15:00 AM
I've always wondered.... "when do they rest?!!" What a great little poem !! Well done, Curtis !!
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 8/18/2018 10:41:00 AM
Thank you, Carrie. The ones around my feeders never rest but they do in fact fight a lot. Mean little rascals, they are!
Date: 8/18/2018 8:53:00 AM
You bet they look busy, they have insane energy demands! Great write! Congratulations on your win Curtis :) xomo!
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 8/18/2018 9:46:00 AM
Thanks, Mo! I can always count on you to express kind words on what I post. I appreciate your support.
Date: 8/18/2018 5:33:00 AM
Nicely done, they never do seem to get tired, congratulations on your win in the contest!
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 8/18/2018 9:45:00 AM
Thanks, Tania! And thanks for sponsoring such a neat contest. I am an avid hummingbird person. I hang my feeders out in early March and leave them until the end of October. They can be viewed from my kitchen window where I spend a lot of time.
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