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The Tiny Bat

A small bat was flying in my house circling over the bed. With a pole and a boxing glove I struck it to the floor. Rabies shots we would get while the docs cracked open it's head. 25-September-2021

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Date: 10/16/2021 4:59:00 AM
I have read your winner and see its good qualities. Way to go in the contest. Congrats. Sara
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Date: 10/14/2021 1:35:00 AM
Robert, bats are lacking here in Hawaii, but I also said that of gators till somebody illegally forced it into our delicate ecosystem. A nerve-wracking situation you've experienced, nonetheless. Nicely done my friend, Aloha!
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Date: 9/26/2021 10:40:00 AM
I really like your sijo. Short and (not sweet) but VERY interesting!!!
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Robert James Liguori
Date: 9/26/2021 11:13:00 AM
Thanks. It really happened to me! Bats displace a lot of air!
Date: 9/25/2021 2:00:00 PM
Years ago my mom and dad had a bat in their bedroom!
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Robert James Liguori
Date: 9/26/2021 11:14:00 AM
I know the feeling!
Date: 9/25/2021 12:56:00 PM
I Enjoyed reading your Sijo poem, humor, and fantastic wording. Best luck in the contest.
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Robert James Liguori
Date: 9/25/2021 1:02:00 PM
Thanks! It's a true story!

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