Abdul Malik Mandani Poet Triolet

The Timeless Bond

As a giant wave rises with passion
aroused by the overtures from the moon
I surf within its folds with high tension,
As a giant wave rises with passion
racing ashore with intense emotion
I must unravel this timeless bond soon
As a giant wave rises with passion
aroused by the overtures from the moon.


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"One Lovely Summer Triolet" contest by Andrea Diatrich

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Kim Merryman June 15, 2015 at 9:58 AM Congrats on your win, Abdul! Nice write! Love. Kim

Skat A June 13, 2015 at 6:33 PM ABDUL, Congratulations on your LOVELY SUMMER TRIOLET ----- SKAT :-)

Jan Allison June 13, 2015 at 5:48 AM Dropping back with my congrats Abdul:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich June 13, 2015 at 1:17 AM Abdul. this is very nice. In the future, when you rhyme two syllable words like passion, you should find rhymes that have stress on the first syllable, such as ration or fashion! Congrats in my contest.

Alexis Y. June 13, 2015 at 1:04 AM Congrats on your win:) Alexis

Nette Onclaud June 1, 2015 at 11:59 AM what a passionate dive and a poetic swirl, abdul... enjoyed this!.. huggs Abdul Malik Mandani June 1, 2015 at 6:02 PM Appreciate your comments, nette. Thanks.

Skat A May 27, 2015 at 6:30 PM Abdul, Enjoyed reading one of your latest poems, Hugs SKAT"

Jan Allison May 27, 2015 at 4:23 PM beautifully penned Abdul good luck in the contest - have finally finished mine will post it tomorrow:-) hugs Jan xx 7 xx Jan Allison May 28, 2015 at 2:41 AM I will post mine later today Abdul - I found this form a real challenge - add to your title 'visual one' - its in the rules:-) Hugs jan xx Abdul Malik Mandani May 27, 2015 at 5:40 PM Thanks Jan. Eager to see yours. You seems to be hitting the nail on the head lately. You are doing pretty good.