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The Time Between the Seasons

Winter is over the darkness the grey I await anticipating the first Spring day In-between for me ‘tis the season of joy Snow drops and daffodils thrill the hoi polloi Hearing sweet birds as they sing in the Spring Blackbirds and thrushes maybe a lapwing Early each morn and the end of each day Joyous for to hear their tuneful bouquet In-between seasons I'm so happy within Just like the birds I’m inspired to sing Winter is ending ~ Spring will soon begin Written 24th June 2022 Contest THE TIME BETWEEN THE SEASONS Sponsor Kim Rodrigues 10th Place Contest BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CONTEST Sponsor Brian Strand 7th PLACE

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Date: 8/2/2022 4:59:00 PM
Such a sweet poem, Ann: Congratulations on your placement. Best, SuZ
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 8/3/2022 1:02:00 PM
Hello Suzanne ~ thank you so much for your lovely comment with kindest thoughts An xx
Date: 8/2/2022 3:26:00 PM
Such a beautiful piece Ann, taking us to forget winter and move is into spring. Spring is my favourite season too, it's nice and fresh and hasn't the full heat of summer. Hope all is well, blessings and hugs Gordon xx
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 8/3/2022 1:01:00 PM
Bless you dear Gordon and so happy you enjoyed my poem. Yes I love the spring too with everything so fresh and new and like you said without the full heat of the summer. Take good care my friend with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 8/2/2022 8:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful" write. I love your ending with birds singing and Spring on the way. I love Springtime a great time of the year. Have a great/blessed day.......................
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 8/3/2022 12:59:00 PM
Many thanks dear Paula so glad you enjoyed my write... Spring is my favourite time of year too. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 8/1/2022 9:31:00 AM
Ann, back with a second round of congratulations for your win with this gentle poem like a gentle refreshing spring rain! Blessings.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 8/3/2022 12:56:00 PM
Dearest Sam you really are too kind and I love your description of my poem ~ thank you... with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 7/31/2022 10:59:00 PM
Some winters are so long it feels like they will never end. Then those shoots of color appear bringing hope and happiness. Lovely Ann! Congratulations on your Tenth place win in Kim’s Premiere contest. Blessings xxoo
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 8/3/2022 12:54:00 PM
Bless you dear Connie for your congratulations and encouraging words. Like you I love to see those first signs of spring for they always life my spirit... Keep well my friend. with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 7/31/2022 6:58:00 PM
Ann, my favorite part: Snow drops and daffodils thrill the hoi polloi Hearing sweet birds as they sing in the Spring. Congratulations on your placement!
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 8/3/2022 12:50:00 PM
Wow, thank you so much for my placement in your contest dear Kim. I am thrilled you enjoyed my poem especially the "hoi polloi" haha... with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 7/30/2022 3:34:00 PM
Congrats on this very descriptive and pastoral winning work. Way to go. Sara
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 8/3/2022 12:47:00 PM
Thank you so much Sara I appreciate your kind words. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 7/30/2022 9:30:00 AM
Ann, congratulations on your win! Spring is just ready to erupt into beauty and song through your words. You have created such a sense of anticipation! Sending you blessings.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 8/3/2022 12:45:00 PM
Awww bless you dear Sam, so happy you enjoyed my words and delighted to hear from you my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 7/30/2022 8:54:00 AM
Ann, congratulations on your win in the contest. Your Time In-between seasons delightfully peaceful. :)Paulette
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 8/3/2022 12:43:00 PM
Thank you dear Paulette for your congratulations and your kind words. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

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