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contest Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: JCB Brul Written 3/24/2026

The Ticking of Spring

Flowers bloom 
  and feminine rhyme the ground 
           Sweet nectar bees crawl upon.

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Paula Goldsmith April 28, 2026 at 9:32 AM Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun "The Ticking of Spring" write again. What fun shapes you have here. Love Them.... Have a great day writing away with your win...........

Supraja Kannan March 24, 2026 at 11:45 PM Wow!!! This is wonderful!!!! Great imagery!!! Enjoyed reading this ...

CayCay Godwin March 24, 2026 at 12:04 PM Very unique wording, an original from first F to ending paren. I haven't been contest inspired yet, but I did let loose on Time/Currency. You got your creative on. I think about you, in light, a lot.

Paula Goldsmith March 24, 2026 at 8:12 AM I enjoyed reading your fun "The Ticking of Spring" write with fun shapes. What a pretty bee/flower picture you have here. "Good Luck" I did, "Pretty Spring Flowers Are Everywhere." Have a fun day writing away............. Eve Roper March 24, 2026 at 8:40 AM Thank you . I’m not good in creating shapes. Drawing or painting sense I am great in