Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Verse

The Threads of Flaw - Acquarian

A crack
In each object
The reason why we get
Precious light.

Diamond
With a defect
Better than flawless stone
To be preferred’

Black spot
Flaw of the moon
But its absence will mean
Beauty has flaw.

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April 20, 2014
Form: Acquarian
Dr. Ram Mehta
Contest: Threads by nette onclaud

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Andrea Dietrich April 24, 2014 at 11:11 PM WAy to go in the contest, Dr. Ram. A worthy win!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 24, 2014 at 3:59 AM Talent so great speaks for itself Dr Ram ! wonderful write,,, loved this one,,congrats !

Carrie Richards April 23, 2014 at 2:32 PM So nice to share a spot with your talented pen, Dr. Ram! Congratulations !!

Frederic Parker April 23, 2014 at 12:30 PM congratulations Dr Ram on a well deserved win

Paul Callus April 23, 2014 at 11:51 AM Congrats on your win Dr. Ram. ...a merited one indeed! // paul

Nette Onclaud April 23, 2014 at 11:31 AM a gem of a piece, dr. ram.. sweet congrats on your fine win in my contest!.. huggs Dr.Ram Mehta April 23, 2014 at 10:37 PM Thanks for the appreciation, nette

Verlena S. Walker April 23, 2014 at 10:14 AM Very nice... Congratulations Dr. Ram on winning in this contest... Verlena

Shadow Hamilton April 21, 2014 at 5:46 AM deep and lovely Ram great pen ty for liking Robin Hood hugs

Sara Kendrick April 20, 2014 at 1:38 PM Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest..Flaws make the beautiful part better..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..Thanks for reading and finding the work worthy of the win..Sara

Andrea Dietrich April 20, 2014 at 12:23 PM very good way to do the theme, Dr. Ram. I am sure it will be on her list.

Michael Dom April 20, 2014 at 9:25 AM I like this metaphor very much. Thanks Ram.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl April 20, 2014 at 4:49 AM Very good Dr Ram , excellent chain xx