The Thread of Poetry

the thread of poetry consists of silken strands of syllables each strand is carefully arranged into fine lines of lovely words one’s pen is the needle stitching golden verses onto parchment For Skat's Premiere Contest number 4
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Babcock Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 1:14 PM
yes I guess the poem is like stitching a garment one word on stitch, one pen one needle. Like the analogy here. love phyl
Ponce Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 7:39 PM
For where will we all be if not for the first weavers of tales from spoken and written silk? I love this, Andrea. I certainly can say I also want this one framed and put on the wall above my desk. :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 30, 2014 at 4:00 AM
So glad this was recognized as outstanding Andrea. I thought so too and thought it would be a winning poem. Congratulations on your wonderful win!
Devnath  Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 1:26 PM
Genius poem about how verse is versed with needle stitching on to parchment. Excellently done. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
Bordner Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 7:49 PM
Just as fine as any Persian carpet, a powerful craft is ours. J.A.B.
Sirak Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 4:14 PM
Hello Andrea, I love the image here of stitching verses. When I read it I imagine a lady in the middle ages stitching a tapestry by light from a window. Its beauty will shine for ages, just like your poetry.
K. Avatar
April 24, 2014 at 2:52 AM
I can be such a sucker for threads, strings as metaphors, and I think it's one of the common themes in my poems....you sure weaved a beautiful poem out of the theme, Andrea-- maybe just me, but how you did this, somehow I envision it as intricate and very beautiful. Definitely a lovely poem for nette's contest!
A. Sharma Avatar
April 24, 2014 at 1:59 AM
Wonderful write Andrea,,,truly said on poetry,,, great thoughts cud be only u,,, congrats on great win !!
Mehta Avatar
April 23, 2014 at 10:35 PM
Nice take on the theme of thread. Congrats on a fine win, andrea
Lawless Avatar
April 23, 2014 at 6:45 PM
Would that it were that easy. I keep sticking myself with that "needle". Keep stitching those beautiful phrases together.
Richards Avatar
April 23, 2014 at 2:30 PM
You took the theme to the highest level !! Nicely done, Andrea......congrats to you !
Jackson Avatar
April 23, 2014 at 2:26 PM
I really love this poem. The imagery is perfect. I particularly like "stitching golden verses". Thank you for taking the trouble to have a look at my poems. Best wishes Linda
Parker Avatar
April 23, 2014 at 12:26 PM
congratulations my poetic friend on your win, really loved the last stanza
Onclaud Avatar
April 23, 2014 at 11:26 AM
great word weaver you are. andie.. smashing piece... a well deserved high win in my contest!.. congrats and huggs
Walker  Avatar
April 23, 2014 at 10:11 AM
Beautiful Andrea... Congratulations on your second place win... Verlena
Merrill Avatar
April 23, 2014 at 12:36 AM
Andrea, what's up? This poem is really sweet; nicely done. Dropped by because I can see you don't get many comments and I wanted to help lol Peace, Mel :)
Dietrich Avatar
April 23, 2014 at 8:31 AM
hahaha, that's a good one, Mel. Anyway, it's all relative. The amount of time I put in at Soup is insane!!!
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 4:32 AM
Your last stanza really hits this one home Andrea. Drop by PFT, I don't have anything new at PS just yet but will soon. I think this poem will be a winner.
Carrillo Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 4:17 PM
This is good. I think you treated it real good. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
Horne Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 2:52 PM
love this, especially the wonderful last stanza
Deschler Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 1:28 PM
This is a very interesting and very unique write. You have done it beautifully, Andrea! Good luck in nette's contest. This should do very well!...Thank you so much for the kind and encouraging comments on my latest poem. I do appreciate it!
Anish Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 9:03 PM
Beautiful poem! Matthew Amish
Allison Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 2:51 PM
Stunning imagery Andrea - its a sure fire winner! Hugs Jan x
Callus Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 12:03 PM
Lovely chain of thought! impeccably threaded and stitched :) a 7 rating. gl // paul
Callus Avatar
April 23, 2014 at 11:40 AM
Back again to pass on my congrats on a great win; had no doubt about its value :)
Carroll Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 10:49 AM
Wonderful write Andrea..Happy Easter!
Austin Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 10:40 AM
Lovely and sensitive. As regards my Advertisement - All my medical doctors are Hindus. I think of them when I see the Christian Mingle Ad. Love, daver
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