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The Thoughts Inside My Head

A word... A thought... The mer memories... The heart brakes.... The friends.... My fun... Our laughs... All just floating in my head... the smells and tastes of all of my creations. Our drawing's from art... the doodles we did. The games we play... The silly bands we ware... Just the fun... And waiting for more to come... (: Thanks... Please comment!! ?

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Date: 6/14/2010 10:48:00 AM
Really enjoyed reading this, well done, Gavin
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Date: 6/11/2010 1:23:00 PM
This is right on point. While having fun one should wait for more to come. It's better than having sorrows any day. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph
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Date: 6/11/2010 12:02:00 PM
A joy to read, enjoyed the write of the thought inside your head.... smiles:)
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