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The Third Chime

Of all the chimes, it was the third, And this I well recall-- It was the saddest sound I've heard, And the loneliest of all. --Mel

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Paul Callus

Date: 4/7/2015 12:26:00 PM

Hi Mel! So nice to see you around! Sad write...you transmit the feeling with ability. All the best. // paul

Mel Merrill
Date: 4/7/2015 10:27:00 PM

Thank you, Paul. I'll be posting a lovely springtime poem to balance the books...Mel

Ilene Bauer

Date: 4/6/2015 7:56:00 PM

very poignant!

Mel Merrill
Date: 4/6/2015 8:54:00 PM

Thank you, ilene...hugs...Mel

Jan Allison

Date: 4/6/2015 6:29:00 PM

deep and sad Mel - lovely to have you back my friend:-) hugs Jan xx

Mel Merrill
Date: 4/6/2015 6:40:00 PM

Thanks love. Truth is, it's downright grim. Oh well! Thanks for the nice comment--and the update on our poem...xxx...Mel