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poem submitted to "1459 New Poetry" poetry contest, Brian Strand, sponsor, April 1, 2026

 

THE THINNING VEIL

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ soft dawn unseals the stone light drifts from Jesus’ tomb~ the veil between worlds quivers. Your breath, older than the stars, moves through the still air. we rise in the hush of Your name~ grace gathers the world to light
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Rodrigues Avatar
April 3, 2026 at 11:20 AM
His breath though old is always pure, palpable and resplendent! Congrats on podium win, dear Sara!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
April 3, 2026 at 4:38 PM
thank you for your visit, Kim, and for your heartfelt congratulatory words. I was sincerely excited
Gauthier Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 2:36 PM
Beautiful ~
Etgen-Baker Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 4:14 PM
thank you kindly
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