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The Things Not Seen

a flag is suppose to wave but it cannot without the invisible force of the wind and waters they flow but they cannot without a current love is suppose to grow but it cannot without desire a lamp is suppose to glow but it cannot without a fire for somethings to work invisible things are required it is the forces that we cannot see that controls the world by a large degree the power of love and chemestry the forces that are, and let things be they live inside of you and me it is as simple as the difference between the brain and the heart one exist inside of you and the other is the invisable part a heart is suppose to love but it cannot without it's invisible part

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/6/2012 10:51:00 AM
Love your take and insight on what is visible and what is invisible . A lot of thought went into writing this master piece. Love it. phyl
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Date: 7/18/2012 5:22:00 AM
very well written,,,, you have a blessed day ;}
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Date: 7/1/2012 5:52:00 AM
Situation...original insight! I like! Jimbo
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Date: 6/24/2012 2:24:00 PM
Congrats, TS. Excellent. Great job. Nice going. Kudos. Ralph
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Date: 6/23/2012 7:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "father & beyond" contest TS. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/21/2012 5:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win!!!!
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Date: 6/21/2012 5:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, makes one think xx
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Date: 6/20/2012 10:22:00 PM
Congrats on your wonderful win with your heartfelt and thought provoking write! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 6/20/2012 9:59:00 PM
Oh, My.. Situation, oh my... you made me read this one again...love ya..., Congratulations for your awesom poem. Thank you for supporting my contest;-) Good night~PD
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Date: 6/19/2012 6:36:00 PM
Enthralling verse with the seen and unseen taking me through these lines of yours. I neverthought of this before but you have done an outstanding job pulling it all together. Love, Lizzie
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Date: 6/19/2012 4:16:00 PM
HA,,, this reminds me of a movie I've seen... called hollow... :-)~ LOVE PD
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Date: 6/18/2012 8:57:00 PM
Great pen Sitch!
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Date: 6/18/2012 8:10:00 PM
Wow...an excellent write here..love the flow and the meaning of this piece of art of yours..!!!
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