The Thing Outside

three knocks on the crimson door,
kill your malice,
sweep the floor.
lock the keyhole, peek outside,
remove the
curtains of your mind.

it will persist, the thing outside
one step forward (or
back with pride).
smell the stench beneath your sight
left eye twitches
through the night.

let it in, take a look
a poltergeist disguised in blue,
it will persist this thing inside,
lock the door,
you lose this fight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Eckiwaudah Avatar
June 6, 2009 at 7:37 PM
great write
Poe Avatar
May 16, 2009 at 6:11 PM
Crimson red certainly has a mark out for the eye...Great descriptions. -Alley
Shahwan Avatar
May 16, 2009 at 8:46 AM
Really good poem.
Devonshire Avatar
May 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes, it sure is easier to fight things on the "outside" than it is to do battle with the feelings inside of us. Surely, we will always "lose this fight." Very astute observation in a great poem! Love, Carolyn
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