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The Thief

Moist salty sea breeze coats all things Slowly erodes metal Takes away man's buildings ~the thief Does no harm to nettle Written Tuesday, June 04, 2013

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Cherie Thomas

Date: 6/21/2013 5:30:00 PM

Sometimes we forget, that they do damage, thanks for a nice write and reminder :) Ty 4 Sharingx

Russell Sivey

Date: 6/19/2013 8:49:00 PM

That salty air does take many buildings along the coastline, they look terrible after many years of existence with with the humidity and the salty air! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this you have written here! What a tremendous piece, Great Work!!

Donna Jones

Date: 6/19/2013 7:23:00 PM

Very nice Sara..and I get what you mean about those nettles! Aren't they something!!!!! Beautiful poem...