The Theory of 'Hardness'

   Life is hard
     Then you die
        or so they say

   I say
     It gets easier
       the harder you try
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December 24, 2024 at 4:47 AM
However hard things are we must never give up trying, enjoy your day Gershon.
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December 23, 2024 at 9:28 PM
Well said Gershon smart and witty and a great play on words. Dying in a way is finding rest up there in Heaven...
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December 23, 2024 at 8:21 PM
Depends on perspective
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