Unseeking Seeker Poet Rhyme

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The That - Sg

intent not yet energised
poised animation
meld with the void, oh hermit
hearts celebration 
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feel soundless thunder
hark sound of one hand clapping
noumenon wonder

16-June-2021

Seguidilla Poetry Contest
Sponsor: William Kekaula

Syllable counts: 7-5-7-5 … 5-7-5
Rhyme sequence: abcb ded 

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Paula Goldsmith July 10, 2021 at 11:54 AM Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write and picture. Have a blessed day.......... Unseeking Seeker July 10, 2021 at 7:48 PM Thank you, dear Paula!

Christuraj Alex July 9, 2021 at 8:39 PM Beautiful creation. Congratulations! Unseeking Seeker July 9, 2021 at 9:20 PM Thank you, Chris!

Beata Agustin July 9, 2021 at 6:27 PM Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, with your words of wisdom poetically prevailing. God bless you. Unseeking Seeker July 9, 2021 at 7:40 PM Thank you, Beata!

William Kelii Kekaula July 9, 2021 at 4:06 PM Admirable (smiling), US, all in sync, flow-words-imagery, exceptionally done my friend, thank you for your participation and your honorable placement, Aloha! Unseeking Seeker July 9, 2021 at 7:42 PM Happy you liked it, William! Thanks for hosting such an interesting contest!

Mahtab Bangalee June 15, 2021 at 11:36 PM one hand clapping!- wastage of energy

Victor Buhagiar June 15, 2021 at 9:59 PM I'd like to see you clapping with one hand....maybe sapping a thigh :) Unseeking Seeker June 15, 2021 at 10:01 PM This has to do with magnetic electricity, with soma nectar dripping in the heart centre, with the reverberation Ohm