The Terrestrial Bird

With cynical thoughts, wings of a terrestrial bird flutters to touch the sky.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
October 8, 2016 at 7:47 PM
I feel like that too sometimes. Nicely done, Sohom.
Gupta Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 11:28 AM
Thanks a lot. I think all feel same in some way or the other.
Smith Avatar
October 6, 2016 at 3:28 PM
Wonderful analogy...congrats
Gupta Avatar
October 7, 2016 at 12:56 PM
Thank you Tim!
Y. Avatar
October 6, 2016 at 2:23 PM
Hi Sohom, Congratulations on your win: -) Alexis
Gupta Avatar
October 7, 2016 at 12:58 PM
A lot of thanks Alexis!!
Kimathi Avatar
October 6, 2016 at 8:57 AM
Indeed miracles happen everyday, but only if we manage our cynicism.... Congrats Sohom, for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)
Gupta Avatar
October 7, 2016 at 12:56 PM
Thanks for your advice Teddy... I guess you are quite right...
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