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The Term of Love

The Terms of Love WHen we finally turned to each othrer after the chase every part of my being cried out, "Surrender"

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Audrey Haick

Date: 1/12/2011 12:42:00 PM

His Audrey, Welcome to Soup! This was the post that I first saw on Monday, late afternoon and noticed we shared the same name. This is beautiful! Always, Annalise

Charles Melody Lightning Ink

Date: 1/12/2011 5:21:00 AM

SWEET AND SENSATIONAL..... MY AUDREY, i think the form of this art is light poetry, check the poetry forms and terms by the left hand side of the screen. love, lightning ink.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/10/2011 6:00:00 PM

Wow Audrey.. intense and passionate lines my friend.. therms of surrender for sure.. awesome as always from your creative pen..

Rick Parise

Date: 1/10/2011 6:00:00 PM

Two Audrey Carey's~welcome to the soup??? Enjoyed

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/10/2011 5:50:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your poetry tonight with it's creative theme.. hope your time on the Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/10/2011 4:41:00 PM

Audrey, how are you.. I love the thought of surrendering to love.. but, on my behalf it had a down fall... Enjoyed your poem,,.p.d.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/10/2011 4:34:00 PM

Sometimes the chase can be a lot of fun, Dimples, but when you "surrender," the fireworks begin...for better or for worse. LOL Enjoyed your poem, dear. Love, Carolyn