The Term of Love

The Terms of Love

WHen
we finally 
turned to
each othrer
after the chase
every part
of my being
cried out,
"Surrender"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Haick Avatar
January 12, 2011 at 12:42 PM
His Audrey, Welcome to Soup! This was the post that I first saw on Monday, late afternoon and noticed we shared the same name. This is beautiful! Always, Annalise
Melody Lightning Ink Avatar
January 12, 2011 at 5:21 AM
SWEET AND SENSATIONAL..... MY AUDREY, i think the form of this art is light poetry, check the poetry forms and terms by the left hand side of the screen. love, lightning ink.
Sweetheart Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 6:00 PM
Wow Audrey.. intense and passionate lines my friend.. therms of surrender for sure.. awesome as always from your creative pen..
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January 10, 2011 at 5:50 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your poetry tonight with it's creative theme.. hope your time on the Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv...
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January 10, 2011 at 4:41 PM
Audrey, how are you.. I love the thought of surrendering to love.. but, on my behalf it had a down fall... Enjoyed your poem,,.p.d.
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January 10, 2011 at 4:34 PM
Sometimes the chase can be a lot of fun, Dimples, but when you "surrender," the fireworks begin...for better or for worse. LOL Enjoyed your poem, dear. Love, Carolyn
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